SUPER HERO THE batman it has black dress he goes to north america.He saves many people but one day he went to save the dimond he did all his best but the dimond drouped of the building but the batman was there and he saved the dimond from the robers. by Rehman Azam
hmmmmmm.. Good effort Rehman. But instead of batman you can some other cool fun imaginative name for your super hero. You can further explain the description of your super hero. What kind of super powers does he have? Remember dear, You will use He for your super hero not it. Rehman, you have to focus on your spellings. Read story books, your class novel and Quest books at home, it will help you a lot with your spellings. I know you can write a much better description. Imagine him in your mind and then try to write about him. Will be waiting to see what you bring forward with a bit more effort.
SUPER HERO My super hero's name is" phantom gladiator".His sword was sharp . His armour was silver and shiny. His body was green and his eyes was green.Though he looked horrific but he was kind and gentle..He saved the lives of many people. One day the "ice master "and his ice army attacked Newyork city with huge ice balls and heavy snowfall but"phantom gladiator"reached at the right time.He used 'heat waves' and meltead iceman and his army.This is how he saved the day. hes the best
Wow, Phantom Gladiator Sounds so powerful. Great work Rayyan. You just have to focus a little more on your tenses. You have to know when to use "was" and when to use "were" etc. Here are a few online exercises you can practice to make your tenses perfect. (Copy paste the links in your browser - Internet explore/ Chrome)
"MY IMAGINEERING SUPER HERO" MY SUPERHERO NAME, WAS THE "BLACK THUNDER" OF JUSTICE HE HAD A THUNDER SIGN ON HIS CHEST...HE WAS FAST AS A SPEEDING ROCKET.HE HAD A BLACK MASK AND ALSO A PET DOG,IT WAS CALLED THE 'POWER THUNDER' HIS REAL NAME WAS TONY,ONE DAY,HE HEARD,SOME PEOPLE,SCEARMING,AND HE TAUGHT THE PEOPLE,WERE MAD,BUT WHEN HE LISTEN CLOSELY,WITH HIS SUPER HEARING HE HEARD PEOPLE SCEARMING FOR HELP,AND WHEN HE GOT THERE,HE SAW THEM,IN A BURNING HOUSE,HE DID'T KNOW,WHAT DO,SO HE TAUGHT ABOUT USING ONE OF HIS SPECIAL MOVES,CALLED THE "ICE BLOW" AND HE SAVED THE LIFE OF THE PEOPLE!!
Hi Esson, Good to see you on your blog. Your imaginative super hero sounds amazing. I really loved how you described his appearance. There are a few things you have got to keep in mind dear. First of all you have to focus on improving your punctuations. Because if you don't use your punctuations right, the construction of your sentence becomes all mixed up. Here is a link to download a presentation on punctuations. It is very fun and informative. Study it carefully and then we can discuss it in class. :-) (Copy paste the link below in your browser) http://www.4shared.com/office/UqAsQQPX/punctuation_2.html?
My Imaginative super hero The name of my imaginative super hero is Flash.He has many super powers.Lasers comes out of his eyes that can burn things.He can fly very high and he runs very fast like lightning. He saves people and kill bad guys.He sometimes plays with me games and many others too.My superhero is very smart. He is brave and he does anything to make me happy.He really is my best super hero ever.
My Imaginative Super Hero! The name of my imaginative super hero is Superman.His super powers are, He has Super Strength, and Super Speed. He has X-RAY Vision, Super Hearing, Accelerated Healing, Heat Vision, Mental Powers,and Ice Breath. His dress colour is blue and red. He saves people's lives, and kill his enemies. He is faster than a speeding bullet, more powerful than a locomotive, and able to leap tall buildings in a single bound. He is my best superhero forever. :)
Hmmmm.... Really nice Zainab... Good effort! But you have written about Superman and have mentioned all his powers. I want you to write about your own super hero from your imagination. You can take other super hero's as examples, but try to write something from your imagination. You don't have to go into too much detail. For now, just let me know about your super hero's name, what are his super powers, his appearance and what does he protect? It can be the earth, a specific place, children who are in trouble or whatever comes in your mind. :-) Happy Writing!
My favorite super hero is super women she is brave and strong .She can fly and can shoot laser from her eyes she also can throw fire from her hands. She is nice to people the People love her because she saves their lives. She always save them from danger and never give up. She is so strong that she can pick whether it is heavy or light. She always saves the day and never gives up.
Wow, really nice Isbah. Your super woman sounds really super cool! Just try to focus more on your tenses and your punctuations. other than that good effort! :-) Check out the links below and study them carefully. They can really help you out.
MY Super Hero! My heroes are my mom and dad. My parents are always there for me when I need help with something. Both of my parents work hard for the things that my family have. Also they support me in whatever I do.These two people have the characteristics of a hero and that’s what makes them mine. From showing me how to work hard to get what I want in life, or just being there when I need them the most. I love having both my parents in my life and I greatly appreciate everything they have done for me. These two people are my heroes
Hey Rubab, What a sweet and lovely effort. I was really touched while reading about your super hero's. Keep up the good work Rubab. :-)
And I hope you have downloaded your presentations and have studied them. Also the links to different online quizzes and exercises. They will really help you in your studies. :-)
My Imaginative super hero! my imaginative superhero is nightwing.He is a very intresting superhero.his powers is lightning and thunder he is one of the top superhero in comics.His ears are so sharp that when he hears something like oh, he goes to save the world.I do not like him I love him.He has wing facepaints and two sticks from which he takes out thunder.I really like him and he looks so cool.He is the best superhero i know.
My Imaginative Super Hero! My Super Hero is Iron Women. She is super brave,and super smart. She saves people's lives. She is super fast in everything. She wears red metalic dress, and shields with her so that she is protected. She can fly, and she has all the powers that is needed. She explains, 'In this century womens are very brave, they can do anything'.She has super strength. I love her so much , She is my best superhero I ever saw!
Wow Zainab! I am really impressed. Your Iron Woman* sounds great and she fights for a wonderful cause. Well done. Just remember a small thing dear, Woman is singular that is when we talk about 1 woman, Women is it's plural, it means more than 1. You don't write 's' with Women. Okay!!! Keep up the good work! :-)
MY IMAGINATIVE SUPERHERO My imaginative super hero is,zord.He has many super powers.he can freez things and peaple, he can also shoot lazers from his eyes, and he also has many guns which are made from fire and wind.He lives in a different planet called namek.He is my greatest invented super heroI made.He also wears goggles which protects him from fire ,and his shield is his hand and if anyone does not even call him for help he goes hisself.I luv my imaginative superhero!
My superhero’s name is "the Iron fist". His hands are made of iron and so are his legs. He can break through walls and punch at the speed of light. He is a Chinese ninja who can also heal himself and he also has a pet lion named Fang . Iron Fist wears a ninja outfit which is yellow and green.
My super hero mame is THE POWER FULl GLADIATOR. He has steel hands and a sharp and shiny sword his dress colour is red and blue he has two different powers. He has saved one thousand people from danger and he was the king the end.
Topic: WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP I want to be a sceintist when I grow up.I want to invent a robot that can do daily tasks and help my mother in home tasks.I want to make a shrink raygun that can make things smaller; like i can make big chair into smaller one so that little kids can sit easily.I want to make a car that can work with solar energy at day time and with lunar energy at night time.This is how I can save petrol and gas and contribute for my sweet homeland :Pakistan.
It's so good to know that you have such wonderful and creative plans to help your country. I really love your idea about creating a naturally powered car!! Keep up the good work!
Topic= 'What I want to be when I grow up' I want to became a Doctor when I grow up. I want to be a Cadiologist,who checks the diseases of the heart, and check the people who have problems.I will give poor people free treatment, but I will charge them if operation is required. I want to save the human's from getting in trouble and want to make them live a happy life. I will make a hospital in which i will treat the people.
Wow, it's good to know that you want to help give people a happy life. But to achieve this you'll have to work real hard. but remember nothing is impossible, try to give your 100% in everything you do and remember Allah at all times, then even the hardest things will start to seem easy.
Topic='What i want to be when I grow up'. I want to be a doctor.I want to be an eye specialist because I love to help people! Eye diseases are very common these days.Few eye specialist are found in town.To meet the needs of people it is important that sufficient number of specialized doctors in each field are available. I will work very hard to achieve my goal.I want to become a doctor. Being one is not only my dream but also my parent's. I don't wish to be the wealthiest and most highly graduated doctor the world's ever seen but I want to be one who will serve her people and country in a true manner. Infact I don't want to be a doctor for only patients but for the needy too. Although I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea to be faithful, humane and achieve great degrees at the same time but it is worth a try. I always want to feel the pride of being loyal to my patients and my duty.
Topic= "What I want to be when I grow up". When I grow up I wanted to be an 'Eye Specialist' doctor. Eye is one of the important part of our body and it helps us to see. I wanted to be a doctor since I was a little boy.I found to be a doctor is a very great profession.Being an eye specialist doctor, I can learn science an many other knowledge. It helps us to be aware of other people and our environment. As a doctor I have to be able to examine their eyes and diagnose the symptom of disease out of their eyes. I will help to cure people's eye and make them feel better. I will study and struggle very hard to reach my dream.
Topic: What I want to be in future. I want to be a Doctor when I grow up, so that I could save people’s lives. A Doctor completes his MBBS., studies in five years in which they study about human Body and it organs. Doctor studies diseases of human body and how to cure them. When a patient goes to the Doctor and tells him the problem then the Doctor then they diagnose the disease and give the medicine to the patient. In this way I would be able to help people to live a happy and healthy life. There are so many poor people who can’t afford the fees of the Doctor. But still they have disease and the pain in their body. They have to bear it as they don’t have money. I want to serve poor people. I want to work in the remote areas. All human being are equal they have they have equal rights like shelter, food and health services. I want to work in remote where people don’t have these facilities they die because of diseases as they don’t have money to take the patient to the Doctor. If the doctor diagnoses the disease on its initial stage then it would be treatable. But the people in remote areas have no facilities, so their disease becomes dangerous and untreatable. I just want to save people’s lives so that they could live a happy and healthy life.
When I grow up i want to be a scientest (InshaAllah) because i like to discover new things and invent new substances.I would invent new things like a revolutionary vacum which sucks air and dirt and releases cold air or hot air and keeps the dirt inside.I also want to make a car which uses air to hover above the roads and can morph into a submarine ( or hovercraft). I think this would be the best way to serve my country. :D
When I will grow up I will be a 'HEART DOCTOR' I will make a free cheakup of the people and if anybody needs an operation I will not take money from them.Then I will make hospital.In it I will have different units and also have a 'ICU' I will do operation by my self I will have different things for my patient I can do anything to complete my beautiful dream. Allah hazfiz the end of my story.
when I grow up I want to be when I grow up I want to be a eye specialist because I Want to help people specially the poor one eyes are very important because if we didnt had any eye we couldnt see and it is main thing of our body I will try my best of saving others life
WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP When I grow up i would like to be a Business Man.A Business man is a person who runs his own business. the part of it if it spreads successfully the person becomes famous.i want to be a businessman because i will the boss of myself i will have people working for me. i will own my own property. i will give charity to the poor people from my money. i will buy cars and a big house for my family. i will help my relatives in busniess n other jobs. iam so excited to grow up as it will be a different life.
WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP When I grow up I want to be an engineer! I want to build robots like Iron man, and weapons that those robots can use to defend our country. I want to make robots that can fight in war instead of soldiers, so that the soldiers don't have to die. I will make machines that can make food all the time, so that the poor are never hungry. I want to make rocket ships that take off from Pakistan and not just NASA. I will make cars that don't give off any pollution to save the environment. By being an engineer I feel I can make a lot of difference for my family and country!
When I grow up I want to be a soldier in the Pakistan Army. I want to be a soldier because my father was in the Army, he is a Brigadier. Another reason I would like to be in the Army is because they serve our country, they fought for freedom and they protect our country from harm. I also want to fight for my country, protect it and serve it too. I think I will be good at this as I am strong, helpful, skillful and quite intelligent and In Shaa Allah i will study and try my hardest to make my goals reality. I will try to keep my country clean too. Hopefully I can become an Engineer or Doctor within the Army as I can be very creative and also love science.
My imaginative super heroes are powerpuffgirls. It is not really an imaginative super heroes because i have seen then from my favourite cartoon channel(Cartoon Network ). There are three girls,their names are Blossom whose hair color is orange,Bubble whose hair is yellow and Buttercup whose hair color is black.All of them have different powers.They have magic belts which contain power in it.They can fight all the enemies who create problems in the society. I like them because their magic are colorful.They have a special mirror which they always carry with them.This mirror can be used instead of mobile phone having web cam in it.I like the way they dress up.They always have matching accessories with their clothes. I want to have power and magic like them.So i can do anything i want. The End.
Topic=What I want to be when I grow up I want to be a ‘Policeman’. Because I want to serve people of my country and protect it from evil .I will catch thief which stolen money from people and the criminals which have killed other innocent people for money too. I will take strick action against those people who are destroying the peace of my country. There are many ways to serve our country but I think that Police man suits me.
When i grow up i want to be. When i grow up i want to be an Airhostess.Airhostess are flight attendants who serve drinks and foods inside the aeroplane. I like Airhostess because all of them are very beautiful.They always wear a uniform which represents their country and Airlines. I want to join Thai Airways because it is my national Airlines. The main color of the uniform is pink and purple.They always have an orchid attached to their uniform. Thai Airlines is famous for their service and hospitality.That is why people always prefer to fly with Thai Airways. The End.
IF YOU WANTED TO CHANGE ANYTHING WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY If I wanted to change anything, it would be discrimination in the world. Everyone has the right to get the necessities of life e.g. water, food, safety, security, health etc... I want that there should be circulation of wealth among all so that there should be no poverty in the world .It is painful to see the kids dying of hunger in Africa. I also want that everyone should get clean water, hygienic food and clean environment .Education is the right of everyone so it must be given to all without distinction .I want that no one should sleep homeless. There should be no war and terror and I want peace all over the world. I want to stop smoking and drug abuse. I want everyone to be happy and there should be no sadness. I want everything to be free and everyone can get a job easily. There should be no unemployment in the world. The world should be free of worries and hopelessness and it will be possible only if there are equal opportunities for everyone. There should be rule of equality in all the societies. I want that we should respect the rights of minorities in the world. I want that all the Muslim countries of the world should unite on one platform, forget all our differences, and become united as one “Ummah”. I want all Muslim countries should get together to plea the case of Philistine against Israel in the United Nations. One of biggest wish to change in this world is to see the balance of power and no single power taking hold of other nations.
Hello class!
ReplyDeletePlease write your ideas about your super hero here!!
SUPER HERO
ReplyDeleteTHE batman it has black dress he goes to
north america.He saves many people but
one day he went to save the dimond he
did all his best but the dimond drouped of
the building but the batman was there
and he saved the dimond from the robers.
by Rehman Azam
hmmmmmm.. Good effort Rehman. But instead of batman you can some other cool fun imaginative name for your super hero. You can further explain the description of your super hero. What kind of super powers does he have? Remember dear, You will use He for your super hero not it. Rehman, you have to focus on your spellings. Read story books, your class novel and Quest books at home, it will help you a lot with your spellings.
DeleteI know you can write a much better description. Imagine him in your mind and then try to write about him. Will be waiting to see what you bring forward with a bit more effort.
SUPER HERO
ReplyDeleteMy super hero's name is" phantom gladiator".His sword was sharp . His armour was silver and shiny.
His body was green and his eyes was green.Though he looked horrific but he was kind and gentle..He saved
the lives of many people. One day the "ice master "and his ice army attacked Newyork city with huge ice balls and heavy snowfall but"phantom gladiator"reached at the right time.He used 'heat waves' and meltead iceman and his army.This is how he saved the day.
hes the best
Wow, Phantom Gladiator Sounds so powerful. Great work Rayyan. You just have to focus a little more on your tenses. You have to know when to use "was" and when to use "were" etc.
DeleteHere are a few online exercises you can practice to make your tenses perfect. (Copy paste the links in your browser - Internet explore/ Chrome)
http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past/exercises?03
http://suz.digitaleschulebayern.de/english/grammar/was_were1.htm
"MY IMAGINEERING SUPER HERO"
ReplyDeleteMY SUPERHERO NAME, WAS THE "BLACK THUNDER" OF JUSTICE
HE HAD A THUNDER SIGN ON HIS CHEST...HE WAS FAST AS A SPEEDING ROCKET.HE HAD A BLACK MASK AND ALSO A PET DOG,IT WAS CALLED THE 'POWER THUNDER'
HIS REAL NAME WAS TONY,ONE DAY,HE HEARD,SOME PEOPLE,SCEARMING,AND HE TAUGHT THE PEOPLE,WERE MAD,BUT WHEN HE LISTEN CLOSELY,WITH HIS SUPER HEARING HE HEARD PEOPLE SCEARMING FOR HELP,AND WHEN HE GOT THERE,HE SAW THEM,IN A BURNING HOUSE,HE DID'T KNOW,WHAT DO,SO HE TAUGHT ABOUT USING ONE OF HIS SPECIAL MOVES,CALLED THE "ICE BLOW" AND HE SAVED THE LIFE OF THE PEOPLE!!
Hi Esson,
DeleteGood to see you on your blog. Your imaginative super hero sounds amazing. I really loved how you described his appearance. There are a few things you have got to keep in mind dear. First of all you have to focus on improving your punctuations. Because if you don't use your punctuations right, the construction of your sentence becomes all mixed up. Here is a link to download a presentation on punctuations. It is very fun and informative. Study it carefully and then we can discuss it in class. :-) (Copy paste the link below in your browser)
http://www.4shared.com/office/UqAsQQPX/punctuation_2.html?
Here is a new link Esson. It will be much easier to download your presentation from here.
Deletehttp://jmp.sh/v/DtuIzmpLfzLtnC7Qv2bE
teacher I write a new story but can I write on spiderman it is easy for me I will write 1 page.
ReplyDeleteYes Rehman you can write it on spiderman, but change the name with one from your own imagination and also the super powers.
ReplyDeleteMy Imaginative super hero
ReplyDeleteThe name of my imaginative super hero is Flash.He has many super powers.Lasers comes out of his eyes that can burn things.He can fly very high and he runs very fast like lightning.
He saves people and kill bad guys.He sometimes plays with me games and many others too.My superhero is very smart.
He is brave and he does anything to make me happy.He really is my best super hero ever.
Very nice Deva! Your super hero sounds so cool. And laser beams come out from your super hero's eyes, WOW. Good effort Deva. :-)
DeleteThanks teacher.
DeleteMy Imaginative Super Hero!
ReplyDeleteThe name of my imaginative super hero is Superman.His super powers are, He has Super Strength, and Super Speed. He has X-RAY Vision, Super Hearing, Accelerated Healing, Heat Vision, Mental Powers,and Ice Breath. His dress colour is blue and red. He saves people's lives, and kill his enemies. He is faster than a speeding bullet, more powerful than a locomotive, and able to leap tall buildings in a single bound. He is my best superhero forever. :)
Hmmmm.... Really nice Zainab... Good effort! But you have written about Superman and have mentioned all his powers. I want you to write about your own super hero from your imagination. You can take other super hero's as examples, but try to write something from your imagination. You don't have to go into too much detail. For now, just let me know about your super hero's name, what are his super powers, his appearance and what does he protect? It can be the earth, a specific place, children who are in trouble or whatever comes in your mind. :-)
DeleteHappy Writing!
My favorite super hero is super women she is brave and strong .She can fly and can shoot laser from her eyes she also can throw fire from her hands. She is nice to people the People love her because she saves their lives. She always save them from danger and never give up. She is so strong that she can pick whether it is heavy or light. She always saves the day and never gives up.
ReplyDeleteWow, really nice Isbah. Your super woman sounds really super cool! Just try to focus more on your tenses and your punctuations. other than that good effort! :-)
DeleteCheck out the links below and study them carefully. They can really help you out.
http://jmp.sh/v/DtuIzmpLfzLtnC7Qv2bE
http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past/exercises?03
MY Super Hero!
ReplyDeleteMy heroes are my mom and dad. My parents are always there for me when I need help with something. Both of my parents work hard for the things that my family have. Also they support me in whatever I do.These two people have the characteristics of a hero and that’s what makes them mine. From showing me how to work hard to get what I want in life, or just being there when I need them the most. I love having both my parents in my life and I greatly appreciate everything they have done for me. These two people are my heroes
Hey Rubab,
DeleteWhat a sweet and lovely effort. I was really touched while reading about your super hero's. Keep up the good work Rubab. :-)
And I hope you have downloaded your presentations and have studied them. Also the links to different online quizzes and exercises. They will really help you in your studies. :-)
ReplyDeleteMy Imaginative super hero!
my imaginative superhero is nightwing.He is a very intresting superhero.his powers is lightning and thunder he is one of the top superhero in comics.His ears are so sharp that when he hears something like oh, he goes to save the world.I do not like him I love him.He has wing facepaints and two sticks from which he takes out thunder.I really like him and he looks so cool.He is the best superhero i know.
Hi Jash,
ReplyDeleteVery nice attempt. You can do much better, I know. :-)
Study these links, they will help you a lot.
http://jmp.sh/v/DtuIzmpLfzLtnC7Qv2bE
http://www.ego4u.com/en/cram-up/grammar/simple-past/exercises?03
My Imaginative Super Hero!
ReplyDeleteMy Super Hero is Iron Women. She is super brave,and super smart. She saves people's lives. She is super fast in everything. She wears red metalic dress, and shields with her so that she is protected. She can fly, and she has all the powers that is needed. She explains, 'In this century womens are very brave, they can do anything'.She has super strength. I love her so much , She is my best superhero I ever saw!
Wow Zainab!
DeleteI am really impressed. Your Iron Woman* sounds great and she fights for a wonderful cause. Well done.
Just remember a small thing dear, Woman is singular that is when we talk about 1 woman, Women is it's plural, it means more than 1. You don't write 's' with Women. Okay!!!
Keep up the good work! :-)
Teacher can I write 1 more essay
ReplyDeleteYou most certainly can Jash! ;-)
DeleteMY IMAGINATIVE SUPERHERO
ReplyDeleteMy imaginative super hero is,zord.He has many super powers.he can freez things and peaple, he can also shoot lazers from his eyes, and he also has many guns which are made from fire and wind.He lives in a different planet called namek.He is my greatest invented super heroI made.He also wears goggles which protects him from fire ,and his shield is his hand and if anyone does not even call him for help he goes hisself.I luv my imaginative superhero!
Excellent Work Jash! Well done!
DeleteI think this is better
ReplyDeleteMy superhero’s name is "the Iron fist". His hands are made of iron and so are his legs. He can break through walls and punch at the speed of light. He is a Chinese ninja who can also heal himself and he also has a pet lion named Fang . Iron Fist wears a ninja outfit which is yellow and green.
ReplyDeleteMy super hero mame is THE POWER FULl GLADIATOR.
ReplyDeleteHe has steel hands and a sharp and shiny sword
his dress colour is red and blue he has two
different powers.
He has saved one thousand people from danger and he
was the king the end.
Hey Rehman! Good to see you on your blog.
DeleteGood attempt! You can do even much better! :-)
Keep up the hard work!
I think teacher this will be better then the another.
ReplyDeleteTeacher reply to my new essay
ReplyDeleteI have replied Jash. :-)
Deleteteacher thank you for such a good reply
ReplyDeleteYou're welcome dear.
DeleteTopic: WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP
ReplyDeleteI want to be a sceintist when I grow up.I want to invent a robot that can do daily tasks and help my mother in home tasks.I want to make a shrink raygun that can make things smaller; like i can make big chair into smaller one so that little kids can sit easily.I want to make a car that can work with solar energy at day time and with lunar energy at night time.This is how I can save petrol and gas and contribute for my sweet homeland :Pakistan.
WOW Rayyan!
DeleteIt's so good to know that you have such wonderful and creative plans to help your country. I really love your idea about creating a naturally powered car!!
Keep up the good work!
Topic= 'What I want to be when I grow up'
ReplyDeleteI want to became a Doctor when I grow up. I want to be a Cadiologist,who checks the diseases of the heart, and check the people who have problems.I will give poor people free treatment, but I will charge them if operation is required. I want to save the human's from getting in trouble and want to make them live a happy life. I will make a hospital in which i will treat the people.
Wow, it's good to know that you want to help give people a happy life. But to achieve this you'll have to work real hard. but remember nothing is impossible, try to give your 100% in everything you do and remember Allah at all times, then even the hardest things will start to seem easy.
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ReplyDeleteTopic='What i want to be when I grow up'.
ReplyDeleteI want to be a doctor.I want to be an eye specialist because I love to help people! Eye diseases are very common these days.Few eye specialist are found in town.To meet the needs of people it is important that sufficient number of specialized doctors in each field are available.
I will work very hard to achieve my goal.I want to become a doctor. Being one is not only my dream but also my parent's. I don't wish to be the wealthiest and most highly graduated doctor the world's ever seen but I want to be one who will serve her people and country in a true manner. Infact I don't want to be a doctor for only patients but for the needy too. Although I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea to be faithful, humane and achieve great degrees at the same time but it is worth a try. I always want to feel the pride of being loyal to my patients and my duty.
Topic= "What I want to be when I grow up".
ReplyDeleteWhen I grow up I wanted to be an 'Eye Specialist' doctor. Eye is one of the important part of our body and it helps us to see. I wanted to be a doctor since I was a little boy.I found to be a doctor is a very great profession.Being an eye specialist doctor, I can learn science an many other knowledge. It helps us to be aware of other people and our environment.
As a doctor I have to be able to examine their eyes and diagnose the symptom of disease out of their eyes. I will help to cure people's eye and make them feel better.
I will study and struggle very hard to reach my dream.
Topic: What I want to be in future.
ReplyDeleteI want to be a Doctor when I grow up, so that I could save people’s lives.
A Doctor completes his MBBS., studies in five years in which they study about human Body and it organs. Doctor studies diseases of human body and how to cure them.
When a patient goes to the Doctor and tells him the problem then the Doctor
then they diagnose the disease and give the medicine to the patient.
In this way I would be able to help people to live a happy and healthy life. There are so many poor people who can’t afford the fees of the Doctor. But still they have disease and the pain in their body. They have to bear it as they don’t have money. I want to serve poor people. I want to work in the remote areas. All human being are equal they have they have equal rights like shelter, food and health services.
I want to work in remote where people don’t have these facilities they die because of diseases as they don’t have money to take the patient to the Doctor.
If the doctor diagnoses the disease on its initial stage then it would be treatable. But the people in remote areas have no facilities, so their disease becomes dangerous and untreatable.
I just want to save people’s lives so that they could live a happy and healthy life.
When I grow up i want to be a scientest (InshaAllah) because i like to discover new things and invent new substances.I would invent new things like a revolutionary vacum which sucks air and dirt and releases cold air or hot air and keeps the dirt inside.I also want to make a car which uses air to hover above the roads and can morph into a submarine ( or hovercraft). I think this would be the best way to serve my country. :D
ReplyDeleteWhen I will grow up I will be a 'HEART DOCTOR'
ReplyDeleteI will make a free cheakup of the people and if
anybody needs an operation I will not take money
from them.Then I will make hospital.In it I will have
different units and also have a 'ICU' I will do operation
by my self I will have different things for my patient I can do anything to complete my beautiful dream.
Allah hazfiz the end of my story.
when I grow up I want to be
ReplyDeletewhen I grow up I want to be a eye specialist because I
Want to help people specially the poor one eyes are very important because if we didnt had any eye we couldnt see
and it is main thing of our body I will try my best of saving others life
WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP
ReplyDeleteWhen I grow up i would like to be a Business Man.A Business man is a person who runs his own business. the part of it if it spreads successfully the person becomes famous.i want to be a businessman because i will the boss of myself i will have people working for me. i will own my own property. i will give charity to the poor people from my money. i will buy cars and a big house for my family. i will help my relatives in busniess n other jobs.
iam so excited to grow up as it will be a different life.
WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP
ReplyDeleteWhen I grow up I want to be an engineer! I want to build robots like Iron man, and weapons that those robots can use to defend our country. I want to make robots that can fight in war instead of soldiers, so that the soldiers don't have to die. I will make machines that can make food all the time, so that the poor are never hungry. I want to make rocket ships that take off from Pakistan and not just NASA. I will make cars that don't give off any pollution to save the environment. By being an engineer I feel I can make a lot of difference for my family and country!
WHAT I WANT TO BE WHEN I GROW UP
ReplyDeleteWhen I grow up I want to be a soldier in the Pakistan Army. I want to be a soldier because my father was in the Army, he is a Brigadier. Another reason I would like to be in the Army is because they serve our country, they fought for freedom and they protect our country from harm. I also want to fight for my country, protect it and serve it too. I think I will be good at this as I am strong, helpful, skillful and quite intelligent and In Shaa Allah i will study and try my hardest to make my goals reality. I will try to keep my country clean too. Hopefully I can become an Engineer or Doctor within the Army as I can be very creative and also love science.
hi teacher
ReplyDeleteHey Natdhanisha!!!
DeleteI'm soo happy to see you on your class blog.. I'm so glad that you have understood everything clearly and have posted your creative writings.
Keep up the hard work!! :-)
Happy writing! :-)
My imaginative super heroes are powerpuffgirls.
ReplyDeleteIt is not really an imaginative super heroes because i have seen then from my favourite cartoon channel(Cartoon Network ).
There are three girls,their names are Blossom whose
hair color is orange,Bubble whose hair is yellow and Buttercup whose hair color is black.All of them have different powers.They have magic belts which contain power in it.They can fight all the enemies who create problems in the society.
I like them because their magic are colorful.They have a special mirror which they always carry with them.This mirror can be used instead of mobile phone having web cam in it.I like the way they dress up.They always have matching accessories with their clothes.
I want to have power and magic like them.So i can do anything i want.
The End.
Topic=What I want to be when I grow up
ReplyDeleteI want to be a ‘Policeman’. Because I want to serve people of my country and protect it from evil .I will catch thief which stolen money from people and the criminals which have killed other innocent people for money too. I will take strick action against those people who are destroying the peace of my country. There are many ways to serve our country but I think that Police man suits me.
When i grow up i want to be.
ReplyDeleteWhen i grow up i want to be an Airhostess.Airhostess are flight attendants who serve drinks and foods inside the aeroplane.
I like Airhostess because all of them are very beautiful.They always wear a uniform which represents their country and Airlines.
I want to join Thai Airways because it is my national Airlines.
The main color of the uniform is pink and purple.They always have an orchid attached to their uniform.
Thai Airlines is famous for their service and hospitality.That is why people always prefer to fly with Thai Airways.
The End.
Please teacher have a look at my essay. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteteacher have a look at my essay
ReplyDeleteIF YOU WANTED TO CHANGE ANYTHING WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY
ReplyDeleteIf I wanted to change anything, it would be discrimination in the world. Everyone has the right to get the necessities of life e.g. water, food, safety, security, health etc... I want that there should be circulation of wealth among all so that there should be no poverty in the world .It is painful to see the kids dying of hunger in Africa. I also want that everyone should get clean water, hygienic food and clean environment .Education is the right of everyone so it must be given to all without distinction .I want that no one should sleep homeless. There should be no war and terror and I want peace all over the world. I want to stop smoking and drug abuse. I want everyone to be happy and there should be no sadness. I want everything to be free and everyone can get a job easily. There should be no unemployment in the world. The world should be free of worries and hopelessness and it will be possible only if there are equal opportunities for everyone. There should be rule of equality in all the societies. I want that we should respect the rights of minorities in the world. I want that all the Muslim countries of the world should unite on one platform, forget all our differences, and become united as one “Ummah”. I want all Muslim countries should get together to plea the case of Philistine against Israel in the United Nations. One of biggest wish to change in this world is to see the balance of power and no single power taking hold of other nations.