When I grow up I would like to change the fact that there is lack of education in this world. Because without education you are more likely to make the wrong choices. Like thieves on the street and they are always stealing things like money, diamonds, or they murder people! They do this because they never learned the difference between right and wrong which is taught through education.
Every day there are children begging for money but if they were educated they would never ask for money, instead they would become skillful people and earn a living. Like a politician would say “if you vote for me I will give you five thousand rupees” if there was an educated person he would turn around and say “no” but if there was an uneducated person he would say “yes”. Politicians are lying to the poor and uneducated people and taking advantage of them because they don’t know any better. If there was a good person elected as the President he would change the education system of his country and set an example for other countries to follow.
That is why the whole world needs education. When I grow up I will keep Pakistan without any robbery and no people asking for money on the streets. I hope if I don’t live for so long the whole world would still be educated. I promise as a Pakistani I will help the education system to get rid of poverty and to make Pakistan a better and safer place to live in.
If I could change one thing in the world it would be finishing poverty. I would like to help the poor by giving them good education, and more opportunities. I want to finish poverty so that the poor can also live a comfortable and happy life.
I really feel bad for the poor. In cold weather they don’t get hot water. And some of them have roofs which are made of twigs and when it rains they don’t have any place to shelter. So if I want to change anything it will be finishing poverty to help people all around the world in different countries and cities. I want to do this to make our world a better place to live. Education plays a very important role to decrease poverty. If we can give everyone good education, they will get better jobs and they will think smart. It will improve their lifestyle and make life easier for them. It will also reduce crime rate. Better education for everyone will not only decrease poverty, it will also improve health system and hospitals. It will make us take good decisions which will help our country to prosper.
I hope we can live in a world where everyone has a good quality of life.
IF I could change one thing about my life: and why If I could change one thing in my life it would be that I could prevent myself from making a Facebook account because ever since I did it’s been taking a toll on my physical and social skills and the greatest affect of all was that I got bad in studies and mostly sad all of the time. It all started in February when my friends started encouraging me to start playing the games they thought I would like. The game’s name was “Social Wars”. So one day I made my account on Facebook and I started to play the game. It was so fun that I would forget about food, family activities and homework. I had a better life before made this FB account I used to do homework right after I got home from school. The case afterwards was I would first use the Internet then I did my homework at late night. I also used to be more constructive, imaginative and interested in physical activities and now I can’t leave the Internet no matter how much I try because it is addicting. I starting chatting with my friends on Facebook because all the time they were online playing the video games and If I had not made my account I would nearly always come first on the honor roll and I would be more energetic, sporty and active and my friends would be at my house and I would be playing with them. My biggest regret of life is making my Facebook account because it has made my life very bad just because of one thing but I believe everything happens for a reason. [277 words]
Topic=Homeless People If there is a thing I can change is "Homeless People" Homeless people do not have any shelter or any money .Goverment has the right to take care of them but does not take care of these children's,kids,men's and women's .If there are elelections a politician says I will give you the money and takes the advantage of that poor people for there home and shelter they can do steeling like diamonds,gold,money.they are also not educated if they are educated why they would do steeling if it rains in a village a flood destroys there houses If they are made up of mud if we go on a signal light different children are selling colouring books pens and when we go to a market they say to us to give money to them and men's say can we clean your car they do all of this to have money.Every educated person has money to buy mobiles cars and much more things but they can murder or kill any body if there are educated why they would do any thing they can not do any job but a educated person gets a job easily and gets a lot of money from that. Good and Happy Ending
I would do anything, ANYTHING, to stop people from ruining the Earth any further. We are all sitting on a branch and busy chopping the branch away, not realizing that when the branch breaks we all fall to our death. Do we really need all those things that humans are making these days ? Do we need all those weapons ? Are we really humans or are we worse than the tigers and other beasts ? They kill for food and survival. They only kill what is necessary. We kill by the millions and we kill indiscriminately. Why do we need nuclear bombs ? If only we cease just some of these nonsense activities and channel the money thereby saved to feed the world's poor, there will be no more hunger. No more children starving, no more miserable mothers carrying their dying children, begging for a little to eat.
IF YOU WANTED TO CHANGE ANYTHING WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY If I wanted to change anything, it would be discrimination in the world. Everyone has the right to get the necessities of life e.g. water, food, safety, security, health etc... I want that there should be circulation of wealth among all so that there should be no poverty in the world .It is painful to see the kids dying of hunger in Africa. I also want that everyone should get clean water, hygienic food and clean environment .Education is the right of everyone so it must be given to all without distinction .I want that no one should sleep homeless. There should be no war and terror and I want peace all over the world. I want to stop smoking and drug abuse. I want everyone to be happy and there should be no sadness. I want everything to be free and everyone can get a job easily. There should be no unemployment in the world. The world should be free of worries and hopelessness and it will be possible only if there are equal opportunities for everyone. There should be rule of equality in all the societies. I want that we should respect the rights of minorities in the world. I want that all the Muslim countries of the world should unite on one platform, forget all our differences, and become united as one “Ummah”. I want all Muslim countries should get together to plea the case of Philistine against Israel in the United Nations. One of biggest wish to change in this world is to see the balance of power and no single power taking hold of other nations.
If I can change the world what would it be. I will work hard in my studies so that I can be a doctor by doing medical and everything else that takes to be a doctor after this I will try my best to take a job as a doctor then I will help the poor people who cannot afford so much money and are very sick and old. I will not only be a simple doctor I will also try to make new medicines for diseases like: cancer, HIV/AID. I will try my best to change the world with my effort.
Read your topic carefully and write again. It's not about what you want to be when you grow up, its what you would want to change in the world and why.
If there was one thing I could change in this world what would it be and why? If there was one thing in this that I could change would be “poverty”. People die because of poverty, misery and starvation as they cannot feed their children. I will try my best to help in providing them with their basic necessities. I would also like to make education free for all so that children could show their talents and parents don’t have to worry about paying fees, and the children won’t have to stay at home, it is my biggest wish to make everyone happy and full fill their wish to make medical treatments free for everyone so that there would be no one sick or sad in this world. I want that no child has to live on the road and beg for money, but have their own where they would live happily with their family. Allah has made some of us rich so that we can help the poor, but in this world the rich people think of themselves superior but this is not true, we all are equal in the eyes of Allah. But unfortunately, the poor conditions of the people are getting worse day by day if I had a choice I would not let it happen and would not allow wealth to acuminate in one place. I would try every to make this world a better place to live.
When I grow up I wanted to be an Engineer. The world is very important to me. I wanted to change something in the world . I wanted to make everything very good, clean and beautiful. I wanted to be an Engineer because I wanted to update and make everything change. I wanted to make robots that could help people and make cars that could work and many other things. I wanted my parents to guide me and be proud of me. I love my parents more than anything in the world. I needed something in the world that could change me and make me proud of myself. The only thing that I wanted was to make a flying car that could work on water so people would not waste their petrol’s and to also make a voice activated TV so people would not waste their energy finding remote control’s everywhere and to help people in speaking. I love the world very much and that is why a want to do these things for many people. The world wants new things and new updates in everything and I am ready to do it.
I would educate people. People that think clearly and based on what is right for the world, over always thinking about money and materialistic goods are the people that will make this world a better place. Martin Luther King jr, helping the white man see that black people are not less human then they are. He is a great example of what we should be.
I mean, when I die, I wouldn't look at how much money and how many neat gadgets I had, I would look at how much fun I had, how peaceful my life was. That is what I want for people in this world, happiness. By educating children to lead and to do what is right, this could definitely be achievable. Get more people to help each other out more often. Either by community service, donating blood, donating money and/or material possesions or by doing as many small things each day as they can to help their fellow humans. I would give free health care to all. I think this one component would change the world for the better. Think about the misery, fear and anxiety so many people go through that are uninsured, or even that have insurance but it is still really expensive. If people had free health care their health would improve, less people would suffer from premature deaths and people's overall mental sanity would improve. Plus, people that need medications would be able to get it without worrying about whether they choose to pay their gas bill or get their meds. THE END!!!
“One thing I can change in the world” I love flowers. I love honey too. I know that honey bee produce honey by sucking flower nectar. I have seen the honey comb in my village in Mianwali. The honey bees make honey comb on trees among leaves and save honey in its combs. I have seen many people asking for pure honey. They cannot find pure honey in the market and even the impure honey is sold at very high price. Honey is one of the best and the healthiest food in the world. It is a natural medicine for many illnesses too. I used to think of the reasons why people cannot find pure honey like we do. Wherever I go, I started noticing that there are no flowers. We need plenty of flowers for honey bees to suck nectar and produce honey. We need trees where honey bees can build their honey combs. I kept thinking about it. I even started dreaming about planting flowers all around the city. Red, orange, yellow, pink, purple, violet – all colours of flowers. “Wow! What a wonder place would that be.” I thought. That is it. I have mission for my life. Planting flowers all around the world so they people can get pure honey for very low cost or may be for free. That is kindness and helping humanity. So, if I get a chance to change one thing in the world that would be sowing seeds and making hedges for millions of flowers in all countries. The countries will look beautiful like a fairy tale. There will be butterflies all around making the air colourful. Last but not least, there will be millions of honey bees making honey for all the people around the world.
Rubab, nice to hear about your wish to plant more flowers. But dear, your essay is to write about the one thing that you would want to change about the world and why. Think carefully. And write again.
IF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING IN THE WORLD AND WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY? I want bullying of children in educational institutions to end. It can have serious lasting problems, not only for the ones who are bullied but who bully as well. It has many negative effects which include mental problems, addiction to drugs and suicide. It can also cause serious problems to health in the form of depression, anxiety and loneliness. It also has serious effects on the performance of students in schools and universities. It can lead top low academic achievements as those who are bullied, are more likely to skip classes, miss school and even drop out of school. I wish this nuisiance is wiped out from our world.
TOPIC: IF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING IN THE WORLD AND WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY? I WISH EVERYONE IN THE WORLD TOO BE NICE I AND I ALSO WISH PEOPLE IN THE WORLD WHO ARE BAD SHOULD BE NICE MANY PEOPLE DIE BY STEALING AND KILLING OTHER PEOPLE I DO NOT NO WHY ROBBER STEALS THEY GET CATCH BUT WHY I WISH ALLAH HELP'S THEM AND MAKE THEM TO BE A NICER PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The Thing I Want To Change In The World I have always heard from my parents and have read in books that we should not fight with each other and should not hate anyone. “Why do countries fight with each other? What is the purpose of wars?” These questions always bother me. The wars between countries kill thousands of people and become homeless. Children suffer as they lose their parents and homes. They don’t go to schools. The countries that are in war have shortage of food and other necessities of life. Wars are not the solution of any problems but create many problems for everyone. If I ever get a chance to change something, I will certainly change the rules of the world that no country should declare war against any other country. If countries have problems, they should solve it by discussions. I will try to convince the people of the world to force their governments to not to attack any country for any reason. I think that it is the only way people can live peacefully and happily. This is the only way people can travel to other places without fear of being killed or being hated. People of the world need to understand each other’s problems and have to learn to respect each other’s culture and faith. They need each other’s help to save this planet. We all must stand up and should stop the wars going on. So, the rule of the world should be ‘No Wars’.
The one thing you can change in the world
ReplyDeleteWhen I grow up I would like to change the fact that there is lack of education in this world. Because without education you are more likely to make the wrong choices. Like thieves on the street and they are always stealing things like money, diamonds, or they murder people! They do this because they never learned the difference between right and wrong which is taught through education.
Every day there are children begging for money but if they were educated they would never ask for money, instead they would become skillful people and earn a living. Like a politician would say “if you vote for me I will give you five thousand rupees” if there was an educated person he would turn around and say “no” but if there was an uneducated person he would say “yes”. Politicians are lying to the poor and uneducated people and taking advantage of them because they don’t know any better. If there was a good person elected as the President he would change the education system of his country and set an example for other countries to follow.
That is why the whole world needs education. When I grow up I will keep Pakistan without any robbery and no people asking for money on the streets. I hope if I don’t live for so long the whole world would still be educated. I promise as a Pakistani I will help the education system to get rid of poverty and to make Pakistan a better and safer place to live in.
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ReplyDeleteNatdhanisha, You are supposed to upload an essay not a comment on the essay title.
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ReplyDeleteIf I could change one thing in the world it would be finishing poverty. I would like to help the poor by giving them good education, and more opportunities. I want to finish poverty so that the poor can also live a comfortable and happy life.
ReplyDeleteI really feel bad for the poor. In cold weather they don’t get hot water. And some of them have roofs which are made of twigs and when it rains they don’t have any place to shelter. So if I want to change anything it will be finishing poverty to help people all around the world in different countries and cities. I want to do this to make our world a better place to live.
Education plays a very important role to decrease poverty. If we can give everyone good education, they will get better jobs and they will think smart. It will improve their lifestyle and make life easier for them. It will also reduce crime rate. Better education for everyone will not only decrease poverty, it will also improve health system and hospitals. It will make us take good decisions which will help our country to prosper.
I hope we can live in a world where everyone has a good quality of life.
IF I could change one thing about my life: and why
ReplyDeleteIf I could change one thing in my life it would be that I could prevent myself from making a Facebook account because ever since I did it’s been taking a toll on my physical and social skills and the greatest affect of all was that I got bad in studies and mostly sad all of the time.
It all started in February when my friends started encouraging me to start playing the games they thought I would like. The game’s name was “Social Wars”. So one day I made my account on Facebook and I started to play the game. It was so fun that I would forget about food, family activities and homework.
I had a better life before made this FB account I used to do homework right after I got home from school. The case afterwards was I would first use the Internet then I did my homework at late night.
I also used to be more constructive, imaginative and interested in physical activities and now I can’t leave the Internet no matter how much I try because it is addicting. I starting chatting with my friends on Facebook because all the time they were online playing the video games and If I had not made my account I would nearly always come first on the honor roll and I would be more energetic, sporty and active and my friends would be at my house and I would be playing with them.
My biggest regret of life is making my Facebook account because it has made my life very bad just because of one thing but I believe everything happens for a reason.
[277 words]
Mustafa the topic is what you would want to change in the world, not yourself. Think of a more worthly thing.
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ReplyDeleteIf there is a thing I can change is "Homeless People"
Homeless people do not have any shelter or any money .Goverment has the right to take care of them but does not take care of these children's,kids,men's and women's .If there are elelections a politician says I will give you the money and takes the advantage of that poor people for there home and shelter they can do steeling like diamonds,gold,money.they are also not educated if they are educated why they would do steeling if it rains in a village a flood destroys there houses
If they are made up of mud if we go on a signal light different children are selling colouring books pens and when we go to a market they say to us to give money to them and men's say can we clean your car they do all of this to have money.Every educated person has money to buy mobiles cars and much more things but they can murder or kill any body if there are educated why they would do any thing they can not do any job but a educated person gets a job easily and gets a lot of money from that.
Good and Happy Ending
I would do anything, ANYTHING, to stop people from ruining the Earth any further. We are all sitting on a branch and busy chopping the branch away, not realizing that when the branch breaks we all fall to our death. Do we really need all those things that humans are making these days ? Do we need all those weapons ? Are we really humans or are we worse than the tigers and other beasts ? They kill for food and survival. They only kill what is necessary. We kill by the millions and we kill indiscriminately. Why do we need nuclear bombs ? If only we cease just some of these nonsense activities and channel the money thereby saved to feed the world's poor, there will be no more hunger. No more children starving, no more miserable mothers carrying their dying children, begging for a little to eat.
ReplyDeleteIF YOU WANTED TO CHANGE ANYTHING WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY
ReplyDeleteIf I wanted to change anything, it would be discrimination in the world. Everyone has the right to get the necessities of life e.g. water, food, safety, security, health etc... I want that there should be circulation of wealth among all so that there should be no poverty in the world .It is painful to see the kids dying of hunger in Africa. I also want that everyone should get clean water, hygienic food and clean environment .Education is the right of everyone so it must be given to all without distinction .I want that no one should sleep homeless. There should be no war and terror and I want peace all over the world. I want to stop smoking and drug abuse. I want everyone to be happy and there should be no sadness. I want everything to be free and everyone can get a job easily. There should be no unemployment in the world. The world should be free of worries and hopelessness and it will be possible only if there are equal opportunities for everyone. There should be rule of equality in all the societies. I want that we should respect the rights of minorities in the world. I want that all the Muslim countries of the world should unite on one platform, forget all our differences, and become united as one “Ummah”. I want all Muslim countries should get together to plea the case of Philistine against Israel in the United Nations. One of biggest wish to change in this world is to see the balance of power and no single power taking hold of other nations.
If I can change the world what would it be.
ReplyDeleteI will work hard in my studies so that I can be a
doctor by doing medical and everything else that
takes to be a doctor after this I will try my best to
take a job as a doctor then I will help the poor
people who cannot afford so much money and are
very sick and old. I will not only be a simple doctor
I will also try to make new medicines for diseases
like: cancer, HIV/AID. I will try my best to change
the world with my effort.
Read your topic carefully and write again. It's not about what you want to be when you grow up, its what you would want to change in the world and why.
DeleteIf there was one thing I could change in this world what would it be and why?
ReplyDeleteIf there was one thing in this that I could change would be “poverty”. People die because of poverty, misery and starvation as they cannot feed their children. I will try my best to help in providing them with their basic necessities.
I would also like to make education free for all so that children could show their talents and parents don’t have to worry about paying fees, and the children won’t have to stay at home, it is my biggest wish to make everyone happy and full fill their wish to make medical treatments free for everyone so that there would be no one sick or sad in this world. I want that no child has to live on the road and beg for money, but have their own where they would live happily with their family. Allah has made some of us rich so that we can help the poor, but in this world the rich people think of themselves superior but this is not true,
we all are equal in the eyes of Allah. But unfortunately, the poor conditions of the people are getting worse day by day if I had a choice I would not let it happen and would not allow wealth to acuminate in one place. I would try every to make this world a better place to live.
When I grow up I wanted to be an Engineer. The world is very important to me. I wanted to change something in the world
ReplyDelete. I wanted to make everything very good, clean and beautiful. I wanted to be an Engineer because I wanted to update and make everything change. I wanted to make robots that could help people and make cars that could work and many other things. I wanted my parents to guide me and be proud of me. I love my parents more than anything in the world. I needed something in the world that could change me and make me proud of myself.
The only thing that I wanted was to make a flying car that could work on water so people would not waste their petrol’s and to also make a voice activated TV so people would not waste their energy finding remote control’s everywhere and to help people in speaking. I love the world very much and that is why a want to do these things for many people.
The world wants new things and new updates in everything and I am ready to do it.
The End
I would educate people. People that think clearly and based on what is right for the world, over always thinking about money and materialistic goods are the people that will make this world a better place. Martin Luther King jr, helping the white man see that black people are not less human then they are. He is a great example of what we should be.
ReplyDeleteI mean, when I die, I wouldn't look at how much money and how many neat gadgets I had, I would look at how much fun I had, how peaceful my life was. That is what I want for people in this world, happiness. By educating children to lead and to do what is right, this could definitely be achievable. Get more people to help each other out more often. Either by community service, donating blood, donating money and/or material possesions or by doing as many small things each day as they can to help their fellow humans. I would give free health care to all. I think this one component would change the world for the better. Think about the misery, fear and anxiety so many people go through that are uninsured, or even that have insurance but it is still really expensive. If people had free health care their health would improve, less people would suffer from premature deaths and people's overall mental sanity would improve. Plus, people that need medications would be able to get it without worrying about whether they choose to pay their gas bill or get their meds.
THE END!!!
Teacher i am really sorry that i couldn't comment due to Saturday.
ReplyDelete“One thing I can change in the world”
ReplyDeleteI love flowers. I love honey too. I know that honey bee produce honey by sucking flower nectar. I have seen the honey comb in my village in Mianwali. The honey bees make honey comb on trees among leaves and save honey in its combs. I have seen many people asking for pure honey. They cannot find pure honey in the market and even the impure honey is sold at very high price.
Honey is one of the best and the healthiest food in the world. It is a natural medicine for many illnesses too. I used to think of the reasons why people cannot find pure honey like we do. Wherever I go, I started noticing that there are no flowers. We need plenty of flowers for honey bees to suck nectar and produce honey. We need trees where honey bees can build their honey combs.
I kept thinking about it. I even started dreaming about planting flowers all around the city. Red, orange, yellow, pink, purple, violet – all colours of flowers. “Wow! What a wonder place would that be.” I thought.
That is it. I have mission for my life. Planting flowers all around the world so they people can get pure honey for very low cost or may be for free. That is kindness and helping humanity.
So, if I get a chance to change one thing in the world that would be sowing seeds and making hedges for millions of flowers in all countries. The countries will look beautiful like a fairy tale. There will be butterflies all around making the air colourful. Last but not least, there will be millions of honey bees making honey for all the people around the world.
Rubab, nice to hear about your wish to plant more flowers. But dear, your essay is to write about the one thing that you would want to change about the world and why. Think carefully. And write again.
DeleteIF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING IN THE WORLD AND WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY?
ReplyDeleteI want bullying of children in educational institutions to end. It can have serious lasting problems, not only for the ones who are bullied but who bully as well. It has many negative effects which include mental problems, addiction to drugs and suicide. It can also cause serious problems to health in the form of depression, anxiety and loneliness. It also has serious effects on the performance of students in schools and universities. It can lead top low academic achievements as those who are bullied, are more likely to skip classes, miss school and even drop out of school. I wish this nuisiance is wiped out from our world.
I want to read more Jash.. Your idea is excellent but i want to see what else you can say about it.
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ReplyDeleteTOPIC: IF YOU COULD CHANGE ONE THING IN THE WORLD AND WHAT WOULD IT BE AND WHY?
ReplyDeleteI WISH EVERYONE IN
THE WORLD TOO BE NICE I AND I ALSO WISH PEOPLE IN THE WORLD WHO ARE BAD SHOULD BE NICE MANY PEOPLE DIE BY STEALING AND KILLING OTHER PEOPLE I DO NOT NO WHY ROBBER STEALS THEY GET CATCH BUT WHY I WISH ALLAH HELP'S THEM AND MAKE THEM TO BE A NICER PERSON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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DeleteTHANK U TEACHER FOR MAKING SUCH A BEAUTIFUL BLOG THANKSSSSS
ReplyDeleteThe Thing I Want To Change In The World
ReplyDeleteI have always heard from my parents and have read in books that we should not fight with each other and should not hate anyone. “Why do countries fight with each other? What is the purpose of wars?” These questions always bother me.
The wars between countries kill thousands of people and become homeless. Children suffer as they lose their parents and homes. They don’t go to schools. The countries that are in war have shortage of food and other necessities of life. Wars are not the solution of any problems but create many problems for everyone.
If I ever get a chance to change something, I will certainly change the rules of the world that no country should declare war against any other country. If countries have problems, they should solve it by discussions. I will try to convince the people of the world to force their governments to not to attack any country for any reason.
I think that it is the only way people can live peacefully and happily. This is the only way people can travel to other places without fear of being killed or being hated. People of the world need to understand each other’s problems and have to learn to respect each other’s culture and faith. They need each other’s help to save this planet.
We all must stand up and should stop the wars going on. So, the rule of the world should be ‘No Wars’.