Look at the picture carefully of the firefighter saving the child and erite your own small story. Write your own introduction paragraph, the main body and the conclusion. You can start by how the fire started, how the child got stuck and who called the fire brigade etc. It's up to you how you make up your story.
Write your story in Ms. WORD and make sure that your story is at least 250 words long, you can check the word count by looking at the bottom of Ms.Word.. After finishing your story in Ms . Word copy the text and paste it in the area where you comment.
Write your story in Ms. WORD and make sure that your story is at least 250 words long, you can check the word count by looking at the bottom of Ms.Word.. After finishing your story in Ms . Word copy the text and paste it in the area where you comment.
One day a boy named Alex was playing with his friend in the building. He was four years old, and he was alone as his mother and father had gone out. He did not know about anything. Then, he decided to go home and sleep as he was very tired but, he couldn't as his parents had locked the door so he continued playing with his friends. Then, he sat on a chair where they were playing.
ReplyDeleteSuddenly he accidently hit the heater on fire. The whole building got on fire, Alex friends ran away and he was left alone. He looked here and there and began to cry. He cried a lot. Everyone from the other buildings ran outside to look what was happening. They were very surprised to see that the building was on fire and called the police. Then, Alex mother and father came and saw the building on fire. Then they began to cry a lot and asked for help as their child Alex was inside the building. Suddenly the police along with the firefighters arrived and saw a child on the building. The firefighters tried their best to put out the fire and save that child.
Then, they put out the fire and took the child out of the building. He was crying a lot. They sent him to the hospital. He got many drips and had surgery. He got a little bit of a hurt. At last, he was fine and was very happy with his family. They all lived happily ever after!!!!
Nice story Zainab! A couple of things that can be done:
DeleteFirstly, you don't have to start most of your sentences with then. Secondly, instead of "Suddenly he accidentally hit the heater on fire" you can rephrase it to maybe, "He accidentally knocked of the burning heater and it fell on some old boxes and sheets under it, which in no time started a big fire." Try to explain your ideas more clearly and in more detail, so the reader can picture your story in their mind.
Alex friends (wrong) - Alex's friends (correct). And the people were not surprised they were shocked!
Alex's mother and father came.... and saw a child in the burning table.
... and had a minor surgery.
Go through the corrections Zainab and write the story correctly in your creative Writing. ;-)
A Fire Fighter Saving a Child
ReplyDeleteA fire incident occurred right across my house. It is the biggest apartment build in our area. The apartments are full with big families living there.
It was last Sunday when we heard loud screaming in the middle of the night. My parents and other neighbours came out on the street. An apartment on the second was in huge fire. The building residents were already out and standing on the street. None could do anything because it was night and the fire was furious. Somebody had already called the fire department. The fire engine arrived in couple of minutes. The firefighters were in full uniform and had brought their tools with them. They pulled out the ladder and stretched it to the apartment window. Two firefighters climbed up, broke the window glass with the axe in their hand and jumped inside. While the other two pulled out a long hose and started throwing water on the fire.
Everybody was standing silent with tears in their eyes as they were not sure if anyone from that family will survive. Five minutes later, the firemen appeared from the building gate carrying a six month old baby boy and a six year old girl in their lap. A woman was following them in rush. Everybody clapped for their survival. The firemen ran back to save the father who, according to them, was lying fainted because of the smoke. The mother told us that her husband was trying to put out the fire and was suffocated due to the heavy smoke. While the mother brought children out in the living room but couldn’t find the way out of the apartment.
Ten minutes later, the firemen appeared holding the father from both sides. Everybody was happy. The father needed the medical treatment and my father had already called the ambulance. The ambulance arrived soon and they took care of the family. Everybody appreciated the firefighters for their quick and brave efforts.
We all were curious to know how the fire started. The mother told us that because of the cold, they closed all the doors and windows and left the heater near the window. The curtain somehow caught the fire. They woke up late and tried to save themselves but failed.
The whole neighbourhood thanked to God that the family was okay. The family thanked everyone for being kind and courteous. Few women among the crowd were holding the baby and kissing him one by one.
AN UNFORTUNATE INCIDENT
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On a quiet night, there was a boy named “Archie”. He was two and a half years old. He was alone in the house with a babysitter “Palen”. Archie’s parents went for grocery shopping and left him with the babysitter to look after him.
The babysitter was watching T.V meanwhile Archie woke up and he started looking for his parents he went in the lounge, but he couldn’t find his parents he found a match box lying on the carpet and started playing with the matches and all of a sudden he accidently burnt a match. He got scared and threw it in the corner. The burning match touched the curtain and it started burning slowly. The babysitter went to check on Archie in his room but he wasn’t there. She got worried and started wondering where he was. She started looking in every room.
When she looked in the lounge she saw the child crying in the middle of the room she threw some tubs of water on the fire she had little success but she had to call the fire brigade she called the police to call the fire brigade. Meanwhile the fire increased and the child fainted because of the smoke caused by the fire around him. People gathered around the house and started panicking. A few seconds later the fire fighters came. One of the firefighter was very brave and went inside the lounge to take the child and then they put the fire out. The parents came at the very same time.
Parents thanked the firefighter who saved Archie’s life. Archie was admitted to the hospital and after a week he was back to home
On a cold Saturday night Ali was at home with his elder sister Sara. They were alone and their parents were out for a dinner. Ali was playing and Sara was watching television. As it was cold outside she on the heater. She didn’t know that the gas was already leaking, so as soon she on the heater it caught the fire.
ReplyDeleteSara and Ali started screaming when they saw the fire. Both of them just ran off from the room. They were so frightened to see the fire. They do not know what to do. Then their neighbor uncle Hassan called the fire fighters. After five minutes the rescue team was at their home. They rescued Ali and Sara. The fire fighters blew the fire with the help of water and oxygen cylinders. Meanwhile their parents also came back. They thanked their neighbor and the fire fighters for rescuing their children from the fire.
And they promised to never leave their children alone in the house.
The fire fighter who saved the Queen’s child
ReplyDeleteOne winter morning, the Queen’s son named Andy was playing hide & seek with five other friends. It was Andy’s turn. He first looked in the garage he found his first friend. Andy’s friend said “Can I help you Andy?” Andy said “no! You are out, sit and wait until I find the other’s”
Then he looked in the classroom no one was there. When he was about to leave he tripped over the dustbin and hit his classroom board and the classroom board fell on the heater and fire was coming out of the heater!! Andy panicked, he didn’t know what to do. He needed to get help from somewhere quickly. There was a fire extinguisher in the classroom, but Andy couldn’t use it. He ran to the school office, and dialed 911 to ask for help! The woman at the phone asked her where he was and if anyone was hurt. Andy replied by telling his school address and asked what he should do. The woman instructed him to stay calm and wait outside the building until help arrived. Andy escaped through the emergency exit door and the fire fighters were at the premises in no time! Andy was scared so he hid at the back of the school. The fire fighters started looking all over for the boy who had called for help.
Luckily one of the fire fighters saw Andy’s hat that had fallen while he escaped. The fire fighter soon found Andy hiding behind some old boxes. Andy was relieved to see his savior! The Queen was very pleased with the fire fighter and in return of his help, she made him the castles safety general!
A Mishap
ReplyDeleteIntroduction:One day a boy named Ammar was sleeping and his parents went for lunch and left the baby with his elder sister sister named Fareha.The boy was five years old Fareha was watching a movie in her room the boy woke up and went in his parents room and found no one there and he also went into his sisters room and saw that she was sleeping so he thought of going to the kitchen to eat something he opened the fridge and took out juice and climbed on a stool to take out the glass while carrying the juice box he stood on his toes and lost control and the juice box from his hand and poured into the electrical extension.This caused sparks from the extension and fire stared comming out.Ammar got scared and tried to run but the fire spread from the extension to the Wooden chairs and Ammar got trapped hearing him crying his sister ran to see what had happened.She went to the kitchen and saw that Ammar was cornered by the fire she got very scared and called the police to send the fire fighters when the fire fighters came they put out the fire and saved Ammar they said to Ammar that always stay away from fire and also explained safety guides to his parents.
Happy. Ending
THE DEADLY FIRE
ReplyDeleteOne Sunday night everyone in London were waiting inside their houses patiently for the storm to finish .Children were playing inside with their toys or playing video games ,adults were reading books or working .Tom was in his room playing video games, then his mother came and gave him hot coco with cookies .After some time the TV signals and the phone signals were off.
Suddenly the lightning struck the house there was a deadly
fire in the living room and on and on it spread in it to
Tom’s room .Tom was stuck in his room and so was his mother stuck in the living room. The neighbors called the 911 .Tom shouted for help. After an hour there was a great bang in the house. The TV got burnt and all the furniture was on fire and also the fridge had burnt. All the rooms were on fire .Tom’s mother used some buckets of water to put down the fire but it didn’t work. The friends of Tom were really scared. After some time the fire brigade arrived. They were right in time . One of them climbed the ladder and saved Tom. As the rest of them put down the fire. After some months they bought a new house and they lived happily ever after. I like this story a lot .
The house on fire!
ReplyDeleteOne day there was a boy named Luke. He was 10 years old. He was a brave boy and he loves to cook. He lives in London. When his father and mother was about to leave for a function his parents told him that if he is hungry he can cook whatever he wants to.
After sometimes Luke was hungry and he decided to cook. When he had done eating he watches TV for sometimes. After a while he smelled gas from the kitchen and suddenly smoke started to come out. When he went in the kitchen fire was burning. The whole first floor was all burned and so he went onto the roof.
One of his neighbor was outside the house so he told his neighbor to call the fireman and also give them Luke’s house address. It took time for the fireman to reach Luke’s house meanwhile in Luke’s house the fire started to get bigger and bigger and many people started to gather in front of his house and so the fire engine reached his house. They used a ladder to save Luke but the ladder was too short. The fire decreased the amount of oxygen and was too hard for Luke to breathe and so Luke fainted. The firefighters decided to go inside the house with oxygen masks. They took Luke and went down safely.
When Luke’s parents went home they were shocked the house was burned down but Luke started to breathe and told his parents the whole story.
The End
Once upon a time there was a child named Charlie he
ReplyDeletewas eight years old and his parents were gone to watch a
movie so he was home alone Charlie got bored by playing
with his toys so he decided to play with fire so he took a
fire lighter and used it on paper but when the fire was
going to his hand he accidently let go of the paper and it
fell on a big chair with it were curtains and fire came on
them when he saw fire in the house he got frightened so
he could not think of anything to stop the fire from
burning the house so he thought that if he would push
the chair the fire would stop burning the house but the
fire also came to the carpet which was right next to the
chair there was also a sofa on the carpet which also got
burnt and the fire started to burn the house then child
did not know what to do but when his next door
neighbors saw fire in the house they called the fire
fighters when the fire fighters reached the house one of
them picked up the child and took the child to the garden
then they used fire extinguisher to finish the fire. When
the fire finally finished the child’s parents came and
started asking questions when the fire fighters left then
Charlie’s dad repaired everything that was damaged
and the child never played with fire. A child should never
play with fire because you might damage something or
hurt yourself.
Samuel and the great fire
ReplyDeleteOnce there was a five year old boy called Samuel. One day Samuel’s parents had to go out and do some work, so Samuel’s parents hired a babysitter called Jane. When Jane went to the bathroom, Samuel went downstairs and started playing with matches. Suddenly! He made a fire! Samuel dashed upstairs and started banging on the bathroom door. Jane came out the bathroom and said “what’s the matter.”In reply Samuel said “fire downstairs, fire downstairs.”As Jane looked downstairs she saw lots and lots of fire. Then she said to herself “my phone is downstairs,” so that’s when Samuel had the window open and was shouting at the top of his voice “help.”Jane saw what he was doing and started shouting as well. Both of them shouted with so much volume that they attracted one of their neighbours. The neighbours then called the fire brigade. In less than two minutes the fire brigade arrived at Samuels’s house. It was hard work but the fire men finally saved Samuel and Jane. But Jane and Samuel didn’t have anywhere to stay so they went round houses and asking for a place to stay. One kind neighbour said they could stay in their house for as long as they liked. At 5 o'clock Jane used the land line phone and called Samuels parents and told them where they were. In about half an hour Samuels’s parents arrived and put Samuel to bed, then thanked their neighbours for letting them stay and finally started to have a chat with Jane about the fire and how the fire started.
The end
The unexpected fire
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a boy named Mark. He and his 15 year old sister lived in Chicago with their parents. One day their parents went for dinner and left their children at home. Sarah was considered old enough to take care of her 4 year old brother. Mark invited his friend , Max to play with him.
Sara was busy on her Ipod and the children were playing with trikes. While chasing each other , they bumped into deep freezer where there was a glass of water. The water spilled and went into the freezer’s circuits and started fire. The children got excited by the fire ;they didn’t know what it was and they thought it was some kind of magic.
While the sister was fast asleep, the children got very hyper and started to throw objects into the fire, they threw lots of things like milo cartons, match boxes, paper, sticks, oil, fruits, jellies and all of the phones. The sister woke up when the fire spread across the entire kitchen, in a panic she started throwing water from buckets and the fire stopped burning but what she didn’t notice was that there was still some fire left and it was close to a big jug of oil and alas! The fire reached the oil and everything in the kitchen started burning again.
The people who lived down stairs in the basement woke up by children's screams,they immediately called 911.The fire had re-combusted because of oil and the children were trapped inside the house.
The firefighters came and could not save the house from burning because their pipes were no match for the big blaze. The firefighters called back-up and soon more trucks came and the burning house was no longer burning.
JACK and THE GREAT FIRE
ReplyDeleteIn the late summer it was a sunny day and everyone was enjoying in the park, and a boy named jack was with his mom on the weekend, he was with his mom because his father had died before he was born and Jack was the only kid in the park who was scared to play, while others were playing on the swings and with each other, but he thought that something dangerous would happen to him.
After they left the park they went to eat lunch at McDonalds, they were sitting near the kitchen side and suddenly a fire came in the kitchen and Jack starts running everywhere and accidently he went into the fire when his mom was so worried.
Then Jacks mom called the police then the police called the firefighters. When the firefighters came one of them went in the fire and took the baby out of the fire then they put water on the fire and at last the baby Jack was saved and even after 19 years he still remembered the great fire and was always a little afraid of going out of his house and they lived happily ever after..
A Fire Fighter Saving a Child
ReplyDeleteIntroduction: Once upon a time there was a child named Sam. He was 5 years old and he was very notie. He lived in England. He liked to play with the fire. So one day his parents went to go shopping they left him alone with his two friends John and Ali, they played with him for some while and left him.
Body: Then he went inside the house and went inside the kitchen and stood on a chair and took the matches out of the cupboard and put it on. He got a burn in his hands. So he left the match and then after some while the house started burning, and he was very scared.
Conclusion: Everyone came out of their houses to see what was happening and also his parents had reached the home but when they saw that there house was on fire they called the Fire fighters to come because there was fire going on and also there child Sam was in there house which was on fire so they called the fire Fighter again and the fire fighters said ok we are coming. After seven minutes the fire fighters had reached and then they but water on the fire to slow till it is off, and while they were putting off the the fire one of them went inside and searched for the boy and then he found him in the kitchen and they were very happy that there child had come back and thanked the fire fighter and they said that they will never leave there child alone.
The End
Assignment
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By: Shahmir khan (4-A)
English Language (creative writing)
Submitted to: Ms. Arooj Iqbal
One day a boy named Peter was playing football with his friends in winters. He was really tired after playing so he decided to take shower.
He went to take shower, it was too cold because it was winters. He decided to put up on the heater, while he was looking for the match box and forgot to turn off the gas which the turned on, so when he burned the match stick suddenly the carpet began to bun, eventually the whole room was on fire. Peter got scared and threw the match stick in the corner and run away from that room and the whole house was burned he did not had his way out so he stood on the side. The neighbours were screaming they called the fire fighters, to get the fire down and to save the child Peter. The fire fighters came in they broked the door and went inside they could not find peter suddenly one of the fire fighter heard someone crying, they could not see any one because there were so many woods and they were on fire, it was very terrible. There was a whole where Peter was saving him self he was sitting and crying so they kicked the woods aside and when in to save the child. And atlast they brought peter out of the the fire.
They fire bridges were also there they put the fire out. Peter was then saved from the fire and after that Peter lived happly ever after.
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One of the very good fire-fighter's name is Abdul Rehman Azam. He is forty-three year old.Now he has saved the people who cannot escape from the fire. He has saved a child who has about to burn in the fire,he has a boy,and his name is Mustafa Zahid. He is nine years old.The fire begins from the robber's bomb which is very bad. Mustafa Zahid began to cry for his father,mother,brother,sister,aunt,uncle,grandfather and grandmother.Abdul Rehman Azam did well.He has saved all the people from the fire. Everyone is very proud and happy. But he has groan for the pain only,but he said "is ok it's a little bit hurt". But this time it's not a small thing,it's a very big thing, which it started with the natural fire when it was centural seventeen fifty-two.This natural fire is called fire tsunami. Atlas,the fire was burned for three months! Now the people seemed to be very tired of this Earthquakes,tornados,tsunami and fire tsunami. The third time it happened its started from the oil factory,but now the people build their houses from the bricks and stone and it would not happen again but all they changes another side between the two great river is called The Land Of The Two Rivers.When the fire-tsunami reaches into the two rivers it has burned for four days!
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Zawaar Haider
ReplyDeleteAssignment: English Language
Grade 4A
Submitted to: Ms. Arooj Iqbal
The Great Fire
When the baby was playing, he pushed the heater and it fell on the carpet so it caught fire. The fire made the room fill up with smoke. The child shouted for help.
When the child’s parents saw the fire they tried to get in but the fire had spread and they had to run out for help. They went to the neighbour’s house and they told them about their emergency. They asked them to quickly call the fire brigade. It took about 5 minutes till two fire trucks arrived. The ten firemen got the long water pipes out and sprayed water on the fire.
3 of the men went inside the house to search for the little child. The fireman with the bearded face found the baby next to a table on the second floor. He picked him up and took him down but the fire was too much. He then went up to the roof and called to the other firemen to send up a ladder to get them down.
The ladder was hard to climb down so a fireman came up the ladder and took the baby down and then helped the other fireman come down.
The baby was reunited with his family and they all were very thankful to the firemen for saving their lives.
ESSON. AKYEN.
ReplyDeleteASSIGNMENT:ENGLISH LANGUAGE
GRADE:4A
SUBMITTED TO:MS. AROOJ IQBAL
TOPIC: WHO SAVED THE KID
ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS A LITTLE BOY NAMED ALI .ONE DAY WHEN ALI WAS IN HIS ROOM THIS HIS PARENT WENT TO BUY A NEW OVEN AS THE OVEN SO ALI SPENT 2 HOUR IN HIS ROOM SO HE WAS VERY HUNGRY HE WENT DOWNSTAIRS TO THE KICHEAN SO WHEN HE REACHED THE KICHEAN HE TOOK THE PIZZA AS IT WAS FROZEN HE PUT IN IN THE OVEN BUT HE DID NOT NO ABOUT THE OVEN THAT IT WAS SPOILED ALI PUT THE PIZZA IN IN THE OVEN AND WHEN HE PUT IT HE HEARD A SOUND FOR THE OVEN HE TRIED TO TURN OFF BUT IT COULDN'T TURN OFF SO AS IT COULDN'T TURN OFF THERE WAS A BIG FIRE HE COULDN'T CALL THE FIRE FIGHTER FOR HE COULDN'T FOR HE WAS ONLY 5 AND THE HALF SO HIS NEIGHBOR CALL THE FIRE FIGHTER THEY TRIED TO SAVE HIM THEY WORE OXYGEN MASK FOR HELP SO THEY WENT TO SAVED ALI BUT ALL OF THEM DIE BUT ONLY ONE WAS ABLE TO SAVE THE BOY FINALLY HIS PARENT CAME WITH THE NEW OVEN ALI SAID TO HIS PARENT WHY DID YOU BUY THE NEW OVEN WHEN THERE WAS A OVEN AT HOME AND THEY SAID IT WAS SPOILED AND HE SAID YOU GUYS DID NOT TELL ME THAT AND THE PARENT LAUGH........
once upon a time there was little boy named sam who was 5 years old he was at his home playing games at winter it was cold then he decided to put on the heater so he dident know that the heaters gas was leaking and his parents were outside to do some work then after a while he took a paper and burned so sams room was on fire so the fire burned the hole house so the the immediatly called the firefighter and the his parent came and saw there house burning the fire fighter went inside the house and saved sam
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ReplyDeleteOnce there was a boy named Mahad. He lived with his family in an apartment building in Ireland. One day Mahad got back from school before his parents got back from work. He washed and changed and started watching TV. After a while he smelled something burning. He looked around and saw light smoke. He ran and opened the main door of his apartment.His neighbour had left the stove on and his frying pan caught fire, and burned his kitchen down. Everyone in the buiulding was running out... But the fire was spreading and Mahad couldnt find a way to run down. He went back inside and quickly called his mom and told her about the fire. She asked him to run up to the roof. She called the fire brigade and soon the firemen arrived. They started putting the fire out and one of them climbed to the top of the building with his ladder. He held Mahad and brought him all the way down. Mahad didnt get hurt. He was saved on time. His mom and dad had also arrived. His mom hugged him when he got down. After the fire was put out they all went home. and Mahad told his mom and dad how he smelled the fire and saved himself. They were very proud of him for calling on time and running away to save himself.
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