If I was a super hero If I was a super hero my name would be Hectic Women I would laser eyes I would be able to freeze anything I would a also have fire powers and would be able to fly If robbers would rob the bank I would freeze them until the police comes and take them to jail. If I would here scrams of innocent people I would fly to check the problem. I would use my laser eyes to break something hard like something which maybe like metal or steel. I would do anything to keep my country safe.
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If I was a super hero my name would be Super Girl. I would have laser eyes, Flying Power, magic and see through power. I’d go around the world helping people. But this is not the only part of being a super hero. You should also study for about 3 hours and save the world one and a half hours a day
if i was a super hero i would or my name would be ..
if i was a super hero my name would be the dark beast i would have a lazer sword on my back in red colour my armour would be like iron mans' i could shoot flame throwers from my hands and have jet packs on my shoes i could have an ablitiy to transfrom any gun in my hand i could shoot lasers from my eyes to burnt an metal door i could fly and save innocent people from villans and dark magic i would have an xray vision on my eyes to see if someone has a gun or kinife and i would save my contry and the world.
Aashir, you have also not used full stops after the end of each sentence. Plz. read your creative writings before uploading them on the blog. Plus, write your creative writings in Ms. Word, it will help you with your spellings.
Topic: If i were to be a superhero, i would be.................... If i were to be a superhero i would be a 'Power Puff Girl'. My name is'Bubble-Blue'. A Power Puff Girl is a women hero. I had a yellow-hair colour and my uniform, shoes and gloves are all blue colour, that is why my name is Bubble Blue. My hair is curly yellow hair and i have a ring which is blue colour because i can have a power- dresser, that i mean that we can change a simple dress into a Power Puff Girl uniforms. I put on a blue colour clips while it was the time to do the power dresser. All of these that i have written , and this my dream to be this person because i have to saved so many people when are not well etc. This my dream! Thank You The End
Natdhanisha, your creative writing has different tenses. Re-write your creative writing in one tense. And try to write it according to your grade level.
Topic: If i were to be a superhero. My name would be Thunder man.I would save people from thunders and for the bad guys i would kill them from thunder.I could fly and when someone is in trouble i could save them. I could always fly and see that no one is in trouble and if the thiefs disterbes i would kill them.I would extrieamily powerful i had big mussels i would the worlds strongest superhero. my nickname would be sparky the world used to call me thunder man and some sparky but my family always used to call me sparky.When someone was in trouble and wanted help they just remember me and i come to them in a nano second.
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If I was a super hero my name would be "BOOM MAN!" I want to name myself BOOM MAN because I can make bad people thrilled of me and go back to their planet without destroying anything. I can have BOOM guns that can destroy bad planets with just 2 shots!! I could make a office of my own and if people are having robbery at their house I can catch the thieves easily. I could have my own costume with all BOOM things and in the middle their would be a "B". I could sell BOOM MAN toys to children and I could be famous, I could be cool and dashing make people be happy and make mansions for them. I could heal people who are sick and who are badly wounded, with just one blow of air. People would love me so much that they will make me their king!! I would love to be superhero, anyone can be a superhero but they just have to be intelligent. THE END
Topic:” If I was super my name would be ------” If I was a super hero my name will be the dark bat I will come at night and I see someone steeling something like jewelers I will show them no mercy they will suffer the deadliest punishment. I will have the dark punch, I will shot dead laser from my eyes and I will help the people and police I will have many gadgets with me. I would fly, I will help anyone how is wounded or going to die. After when I save someone I will be vanished in the shadows.
If I were a superhero my name would be “Inferox”. I would save the world from super villains like Glacerox, the super villain who tries to take over the world by freezing the people with his army of frosty soldiers.
I would have many powers. I would wear a quantum blaze suit, which would keep me safe from many attacks. The armor would be made of titanium, carrying a psychic force field, which would reflect most attacks. I would have four arms, with different types of powers. One arm would be a chain saw and the other would be a buzz saw. The rest of the arms would have super burning claws on them, which could slice the enemy. I would also have the ability to use the burning claws to produce fireballs. Inferox would have goggles with the power of shooting a laser, which would disintegrate enemies. I would unleash a fiery blast from my chest, which would annihilate the hardest of opponents. I could also spin to form a tornado of fire to obliterate enemies. I would be a master in martial arts making Inferox excellent at ‘melee combat’. I would have powers to levitate by thrusters attached to my feet.
Although my opponents would be tough and would put up a good fight I would always save the day.
Topic: If I would be a Super Hero If I would be a super hero my name would be is THE POWER FULL GLADIATOR. I would have steel hands and a sharp and shiny sword. My dress colour would be red and blue. I would have two different powers named lazer eyes and steel . I had saved one young lady from a building she had a bag full of diamonds. Green Lantern was holding that bag when I freezed the bag green lantern sent a huge storm I controlled the storm with my gladiator hands he was amazed of my power and then he gave me the diamonds bag and I gave that bag to the lady she said thank you to me. But then what happened the next day THE POWER FULL GLADIATOR was made the king of London and he was always there to save his kingdom. I wish this would be real.
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If I would be a super hero my name would be Super Girl. I would have flying power, ice power, water power, fire power, laser eyes, speed power, invisibility power, shocking power and camouflage power. I would do everything to save the Earth. I would travel ever where every day to see if any of them are in trouble. If a bank is being robbed, I will send them to jail immediately. If anyone attacks the Earth I will also sent them to jail. I will never let anyone harm the Earth. I will always protect the Earth. But not every super hero needs powers. To be a super hero you should always tell the truth and help people you see get hurt or if someone is bulling another person you should tell an adult. We should never tell a lie to be safe because if you do you will not only get scolded by your parents you will also be punished by Allah. I will always keep our beautiful Earth safe no matter what happens. I will never let anything happen to it. Thank You!
If I was a super hero If I was a super hero my name would be Super Women. I would have laser eyes and would be able to freeze anything I would also have fire powers and would be able to fly with it. I would be able to control air and would be able to throw water out of my hands. If anyone would be in danger I would go help them. I shell fly across the world to check if anyone is in danger I would use me super powers to save him if somebody will try to rob the bank I won’t let it happen I will quickly go there like a spark which passé in front of your eyes. I will catch the robber and will send them to jail in one minute. You should always try being a good super hero for you city or country. You should always be truthful because if you won’t be truthful you will have to pay for it. Always be a good hero The End
IF I WAS A SUPERHERO WHAT WOULD BE MY NAME…………… When I was a baby I always dreamt to be a superhero like my favorite superman, hulk and captain America. Well If I was a superhero my name would be Master Enchantico . He was a professor who works for an evil gang named Razors. When the razors kill his beloved ones, he decides to possess himself from a voodoo magician and take revenge . When he gets possessed, he wears a black cloak with pictures of snakes , his eyes get dark purple , he gets as strong as a slab of steel and has a picture of a skull on his shirt .He has a pet which is a giant troll named Edward . He has power to control demons but only for good reasons. He uses his power to create stink gas , and runs as fast as light. He controls perilous beasts, and shape shifts himself and could terminate his enemies .Then he exterminates the razors and the people of Larithion .People consider him as a superhero and thank him for terminating the cunning gang. I also want to kill the beasts and devils so that there is no evil left in the world. As Enchentico learns kung fu and creates his own moves like the purple dragon and the fists of voodoo, Other enemies join up as a team to battle Master Enchantico. His most vicious opponent is ripper he would rip everything from his cruel sharp long nails and his sidekick kid drago he would transform himself into a dragon and burn people with his blazing fires.But he is no match for my super hero. Enchantico is the one I dream of being .Just Like him I want to vanish and terminate all the evil forces in the world so that there is peace all around and I always want to be on time to save the world.
if i was a super hero what would be my name ..............
when I was small always wanted to be a super hero.To save the world and the people. I had power of fire water and ice and people would call me the the dark beast i always come at night and save people. I would have spikes on my coat and guns on my back i would be wearing a mask in blue colour so no one would be able to see me i would have long spikes on my hands. I would kill the robbers who rob the banks and if they get away i would freez their tiers so they stop and kill them and i would be soo strong that i could pick a car i would try to kill all evil man or female to get peace in the world.
If I were a superhero, I would want to be like super woman. I would do anything I want to do. I could fly, shoot laser beams through my eyes, have super strength, invisibility, and have super speed. My name would be The Bullet. My powers would be flying, strength, laser eyes, invisibility, super strength, and super speed because then I could get places faster, be stronger, melt things with my eyes, and secretly be places without anyone else knowing. I would be able to do almost anything I wanted without anybody having a say in it. I could cook my own meals with my laser beam eyes. I could save loads of money on gas by flying or running everywhere. I would also be super fit due to running or flying everywhere. Along with having super strength I would be able to also be a hero to anyone that needed help lifting things, or getting their kittens out of the tree, or any need anyone needed I could help them. My name was The Bullet; my outfit would be jeans and a t-shirt, because they are super comfortable and are casual. My t-shirt would be pink because my favorite color is pink. And my shoes would be running tennis shoes because they are my favorite to wear and most comfortable. I would look casual to not stand out so badly in a crowd.
If I was a Superhero I would be a ‘Star Group’ and my name will be ‘Star Girl Dual.’ Superhero is person that protects everything about the problem for the people. Superhero is also popular for all over the world due to his or her kindness, genius and hardworking and all the people are proud with her and loved her. I am a woman Superhero! If I was a Superhero I would like to do all women well-fair work. I would do the work for needy and poor people. A person who has no cloths, no shelters, no food, etc. I do work for a child who belongs to poor or needy family and cannot get an education for their bad condition of life. Such a like children I fulfill their expenditure so that they get the high education. I do establish the institution like school, colleges and libraries for poor and needy people. And I do establish the hospitals, clinics and parks etc. for poor children. If I will do all these good work and everyone will love and respect me. Poor and needy people and children will live a good life. Everyone will pray to me and God will give me a reward one day, must! Inshallah :-]
If I was a Superhero, my name would be…… If I were to be a Superhero. My name would be “Ms. Extremity”. My power would be the ability to control time. With my power, I would be able to stop, reverse, slow down and speed up time whenever I pleased. Having control of time would give me control of any situation, whether it involves me or not. My superpower would make my life easier. If I didn't feel like waking up, I could just stop time and sleep in for a while. If I stumble and start to fall, all I would have to do is slow down time and recover. Another way I would use for superpower would be to help me think through tough situations. Having the power to stop time would give me the ability to ponder the possible outcomes of my decision and allow me to choose the best option. Being able to control time would truly be an ultimate power to have. Therefore, having the ability to control time would be an amazing superpower to have. There would be many different opportunities to help myself and others. But, there would also be added responsibilities that I would have to deal with. For that reason, having a superpower is not always as great as it seems, but despite the drawbacks, it would be well worth it.
Taxila is a town and an important archaeological site in Rawalpindi district of the Punjab province in Pakistan. Taxila is situated about 32 km (20 mi) north-west of Islamabad and Rawalpindi; just off the famous Grand Trunk Road. The town lies 549 metres (1,801 ft) above sea level. It is the headquarters of the Taxila Tehsil in Rawalpindi district.
if i was a super hero i would be ................................................... If I was a super hero my name would be wonder women. i would have laser power, i throw laser from my eye. i would have jail power and put it on the theifs with my hand
i would help people, police, and save the city, country, towns and the whole world.
If I was a super hero
ReplyDeleteIf I was a super hero my name would be Hectic Women I would laser eyes I would be able to freeze anything I would a also have fire powers and would be able to fly If robbers would rob the bank I would freeze them until the police comes and take them to jail. If I would here scrams of innocent people I would fly to check the problem. I would use my laser eyes to break something hard like something which maybe like metal or steel. I would do anything to keep my country safe.
Where are the full stops Isbah?? And your word count is too little. Write your Creative Writing again and be more elaborate.
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ReplyDeleteIf I was a super hero my name would be Super Girl. I would have laser eyes, Flying Power, magic and see through power. I’d go around the world helping people. But this is not the only part of being a super hero. You should also study for about 3 hours and save the world one and a half hours a day
Write your creative writing again and remember to write atleast 200 words... It's not supposed to be just one paragraph.
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ReplyDeleteif i was a super hero my name would be the dark beast i would have a lazer sword on my back in red colour my armour would be like iron mans' i could shoot flame throwers from my hands and have jet packs on my shoes i could have an ablitiy to transfrom any gun in my hand i could shoot lasers from my eyes to burnt an metal door i could fly and save innocent people from villans and dark magic i would have an xray vision on my eyes to see if someone has a gun or kinife
and i would save my contry and the world.
Aashir, you have also not used full stops after the end of each sentence. Plz. read your creative writings before uploading them on the blog. Plus, write your creative writings in Ms. Word, it will help you with your spellings.
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ReplyDeleteIf i were to be a superhero i would be a 'Power Puff Girl'. My name is'Bubble-Blue'.
A Power Puff Girl is a women hero. I had a yellow-hair colour and my uniform, shoes and gloves are all blue colour, that is why my name is Bubble Blue. My hair is curly yellow hair and i have a ring which is blue colour because i can have a power- dresser, that i mean that we can change a simple dress into a Power Puff Girl uniforms. I put on a blue colour clips while it was the time to do the power dresser.
All of these that i have written , and this my dream to be this person because i have to saved so many people when are not well etc.
This my dream!
Thank You
The End
Natdhanisha, your creative writing has different tenses. Re-write your creative writing in one tense. And try to write it according to your grade level.
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ReplyDeleteMy name would be Thunder man.I would save people from thunders and for the bad guys i would kill them from thunder.I could fly and when someone is in trouble i could save them. I could always fly and see that no one is in trouble
and if the thiefs disterbes i would kill them.I would extrieamily powerful i had big
mussels i would the worlds strongest superhero. my nickname would be sparky the
world used to call me thunder man and some sparky but my family always used to
call me sparky.When someone was in trouble and wanted help they just remember me and i come to them in
a nano second.
THE END
DeleteWRITE YOUR CREATIVE WRITINGS IN MS.WORD TO AVOID TOO MANY SPELLING MISTAKES. WRITE IT AGAIN.
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ReplyDeleteIf I was a super hero my name would be "BOOM MAN!" I want to name myself BOOM MAN because I can make bad people thrilled of me and go back to their planet without destroying anything. I can have BOOM guns that can destroy bad planets with just 2 shots!! I could make a office of my own and if people are having robbery at their house I can catch the thieves easily. I could have my own costume with all BOOM things and in the middle their would be a "B". I could sell BOOM MAN toys to children and I could be famous, I could be cool and dashing make people be happy and make mansions for them. I could heal people who are sick and who are badly wounded, with just one blow of air. People would love me so much that they will make me their king!!
I would love to be superhero, anyone can be a superhero but they just have to be intelligent.
THE END
It is a little short but is it good??
DeleteYes it is good Hamzah, but try to write in a bit more detail. And to be a super hero you need to be brave!! Intelligence comes after that ;-)
DeleteSo should I write it again???
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ReplyDeleteIf I was a super hero my name will be the dark bat I will come at night and I see someone steeling something like jewelers I will show them no mercy they will suffer the deadliest punishment. I will have the dark punch, I will shot dead laser from my eyes and I will help the people and police I will have many gadgets with me. I would fly, I will help anyone how is wounded or going to die. After when I save someone I will be vanished in the shadows.
THE END
Too small. Uzair try to write according to your level.
DeleteIf I were a superhero my name would be “Inferox”. I would save the world from super villains like Glacerox, the super villain who tries to take over the world by freezing the people with his army of frosty soldiers.
ReplyDeleteI would have many powers. I would wear a quantum blaze suit, which would keep me safe from many attacks. The armor would be made of titanium, carrying a psychic force field, which would reflect most attacks.
I would have four arms, with different types of powers. One arm would be a chain saw and the other would be a buzz saw. The rest of the arms would have super burning claws on them, which could slice the enemy. I would also have the ability to use the burning claws to produce fireballs.
Inferox would have goggles with the power of shooting a laser, which would disintegrate enemies. I would unleash a fiery blast from my chest, which would annihilate the hardest of opponents. I could also spin to form a tornado of fire to obliterate enemies. I would be a master in martial arts making Inferox excellent at ‘melee combat’. I would have powers to levitate by thrusters attached to my feet.
Although my opponents would be tough and would put up a good fight I would always save the day.
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ReplyDeleteIf I would be a super hero my name would be is THE POWER FULL GLADIATOR. I would have steel hands and a sharp and shiny sword. My dress colour would be red and blue. I would have two different powers named lazer eyes and steel . I had saved one young lady from a building she had a bag full of diamonds. Green Lantern was holding that bag when I freezed the bag green lantern sent a huge storm I controlled the storm with my gladiator hands he was amazed of my power and then he gave me the diamonds bag and I gave that bag to the lady she said thank you to me. But then what happened the next day THE POWER FULL GLADIATOR was made the king of London and he was always there to save his kingdom. I wish this would be real.
Teacher is this eassy good.()?
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ReplyDeleteIf I would be a super hero my name would be Super Girl. I would have flying power, ice power, water power, fire power, laser eyes, speed power, invisibility power, shocking power and camouflage power. I would do everything to save the Earth. I would travel ever where every day to see if any of them are in trouble. If a bank is being robbed, I will send them to jail immediately. If anyone attacks the Earth I will also sent them to jail. I will never let anyone harm the Earth. I will always protect the Earth. But not every super hero needs powers. To be a super hero you should always tell the truth and help people you see get hurt or if someone is bulling another person you should tell an adult. We should never tell a lie to be safe because if you do you will not only get scolded by your parents you will also be punished by Allah. I will always keep our beautiful Earth safe no matter what happens. I will never let anything happen to it.
Thank You!
Is this good teacher
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ReplyDeleteIf I was a super hero my name would be Super Women. I would have laser eyes and would be able to freeze anything I would also have fire powers and would be able to fly with it. I would be able to control air and would be able to throw water out of my hands.
If anyone would be in danger I would go help them. I shell fly across the world to check if anyone is in danger I would use me super powers to save him if somebody will try to rob the bank I won’t let it happen I will quickly go there like a spark which passé in front of your eyes. I will catch the robber and will send them to jail in one minute. You should always try being a good super hero for you city or country.
You should always be truthful because if you won’t be truthful you will have to pay for it.
Always be a good hero
The End
IF I WAS A SUPERHERO WHAT WOULD BE MY NAME……………
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a baby I always dreamt to be a superhero like my favorite superman, hulk and captain America. Well If I was a superhero my name would be Master Enchantico . He was a professor who works for an evil gang named Razors. When the razors kill his beloved ones, he decides to possess himself from a voodoo magician and take revenge . When he gets possessed, he wears a black cloak with pictures of snakes , his eyes get dark purple , he gets as strong as a slab of steel and has a picture of a skull on his shirt .He has a pet which is a giant troll named Edward . He has power to control demons but only for good reasons. He uses his power to create stink gas , and runs as fast as light. He controls perilous beasts, and shape shifts himself and could terminate his enemies .Then he exterminates the razors and the people of Larithion .People consider him as a superhero and thank him for terminating the cunning gang. I also want to kill the beasts and devils so that there is no evil left in the world. As Enchentico learns kung fu and creates his own moves like the purple dragon and the fists of voodoo, Other enemies join up as a team to battle Master Enchantico. His most vicious opponent is ripper he would rip everything from his cruel sharp long nails and his sidekick kid drago he would transform himself into a dragon and burn people with his blazing fires.But he is no match for my super hero. Enchantico is the one I dream of being .Just Like him I want to vanish and terminate all the evil forces in the world so that there is peace all around and I always want to be on time to save the world.
if i was a super hero what would be my name ..............
ReplyDeletewhen I was small always wanted to be a super hero.To save the world and the people. I had power of fire water and ice and people would call me the the dark beast i always come at night and save people. I would have spikes on my coat and guns on my back i would be wearing a mask in blue colour so no one would be able to see me i would have long spikes on my hands. I would kill the robbers who rob the banks and if they get away i would freez their tiers so they stop and kill them and i would be soo strong that i could pick a car i would try to kill all evil man or female to get peace in the world.
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ReplyDeleteIf I were a superhero, I would want to be like super woman. I would do anything I want to do. I could fly, shoot laser beams through my eyes, have super strength, invisibility, and have super speed. My name would be The Bullet. My powers would be flying, strength, laser eyes, invisibility, super strength, and super speed because then I could get places faster, be stronger, melt things with my eyes, and secretly be places without anyone else knowing. I would be able to do almost anything I wanted without anybody having a say in it. I could cook my own meals with my laser beam eyes. I could save loads of money on gas by flying or running everywhere. I would also be super fit due to running or flying everywhere. Along with having super strength I would be able to also be a hero to anyone that needed help lifting things, or getting their kittens out of the tree, or any need anyone needed I could help them. My name was The Bullet; my outfit would be jeans and a t-shirt, because they are super comfortable and are casual. My t-shirt would be pink because my favorite color is pink. And my shoes would be running tennis shoes because they are my favorite to wear and most comfortable. I would look casual to not stand out so badly in a crowd.
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ReplyDeleteIf I was a Superhero I would be a ‘Star Group’ and my name will be ‘Star Girl Dual.’
Superhero is person that protects everything about the problem for the people. Superhero is also popular for all over the world due to his or her kindness, genius and hardworking and all the people are proud with her and loved her. I am a woman Superhero!
If I was a Superhero I would like to do all women well-fair work. I would do the work for needy and poor people. A person who has no cloths, no shelters, no food, etc. I do work for a child who belongs to poor or needy family and cannot get an education for their bad condition of life.
Such a like children I fulfill their expenditure so that they get the high education.
I do establish the institution like school, colleges and libraries for poor and needy people. And I do establish the hospitals, clinics and parks etc. for poor children.
If I will do all these good work and everyone will love and respect me. Poor and needy people and children will live a good life. Everyone will pray to me and God will give me a reward one day, must!
Inshallah :-]
If I was a Superhero, my name would be……
ReplyDeleteIf I were to be a Superhero. My name would be “Ms. Extremity”. My power would be the ability to control time. With my power, I would be able to stop, reverse, slow down and speed up time whenever I pleased. Having control of time would give me control of any situation, whether it involves me or not.
My superpower would make my life easier. If I didn't feel like waking up, I could just stop time and sleep in for a while. If I stumble and start to fall, all I would have to do is slow down time and recover. Another way I would use for superpower would be to help me think through tough situations. Having the power to stop time would give me the ability to ponder the possible outcomes of my decision and allow me to choose the best option. Being able to control time would truly be an ultimate power to have.
Therefore, having the ability to control time would be an amazing superpower to have. There would be many different opportunities to help myself and others. But, there would also be added responsibilities that I would have to deal with. For that reason, having a superpower is not always as great as it seems, but despite the drawbacks, it would be well worth it.
Teacher, i will write about Taxila here and it is in the next comment.
ReplyDeleteTaxila is a town and an important archaeological site in Rawalpindi district of the Punjab province in Pakistan. Taxila is situated about 32 km (20 mi) north-west of Islamabad and Rawalpindi; just off the famous Grand Trunk Road. The town lies 549 metres (1,801 ft) above sea level. It is the headquarters of the Taxila Tehsil in Rawalpindi district.
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ReplyDeleteIf I was a super hero my name would be wonder women. i would have laser power, i throw laser from my eye. i would have jail power and put it on the theifs with my hand
i would help people, police, and save the city, country, towns and the whole world.