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Sunday, March 9, 2014

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A journey on a pirate / spaceship!!


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  1. A Journey on a spaceship
    One night I was asleep with my best friend it was actually a sleep over I woke up at midnight and saw a light because of the light my friend woke up I went to check what was outside making the bright light then me and my friend saw a spaceship which was standing there when I stepped on the door it just quickly close my friend held my hand and tried to pull me out but she couldn’t and got sucked in it
    After that we kept trying to open the door but it was too much tight then suddenly we came to space and my legs started flying my friend just got upside down and the doors handle slipped through my hand then we landed on a planet there we saw something when they came a little closer they looked like they were human beings just like us but later when they came closer they were aliens which ate meat so we quickly hid I was really scared than when we ran to the space ship the lien held my leg and pulled I started screaming then my friend quickly ran to the space ship to find a weapon to hit it on the aliens head then she found an emergency stick she broke the glass and took it then she went outside and hit the stick on the aliens head then she helped me to stand up and then we ran to the space ship the then we saw a note on the of the spaceship controller it said we just have to write the place where we have to go then my friend wrote earth and it took us there mean while my mother was finding me and my friend the when we reached there we came in front of my mother she asked us where were we so I said we went to play outside to play so she listened to me and went. Me and my friend had a great adventure and never forgot it.

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  2. Journey on a space ship
    One night I was sleeping and a loud sound came from my garden when I went to see what it was it was a spaceship .I went inside the space ship suddenly it went up after three days I arrived on a planet named Jupiter I saw a lot of aliens some were green and blue and red and they had screen on their face . But when my father came out of the space ship the he gave some food to the aliens but they had different food from us but still I was scared of the aliens but they were good aliens. The aliens took me and my father to their private room which was straight like a arrow form the sun in that room were many aliens. The aliens gave me a thing made out of metal. They gave a nice mobile to my father. Then we plan to go back to our space ship and the space ship stared and we finaly reach our home.
    Thank you

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  3. Journey on a pirate ship
    Last summer vacation me and my best friend Jash planned to have a journey on a ship. On june 19th we were on board, my father payed the money for a cabin there were two beds in one cabin, jash and me slept in the cabin, we had our lunch in our cabin e.t.c.
    One night there was a thunder storm when the storm was finished something terrible happened; we were surrounded by pirate ships. They kidnapped us. The name of the captain of the ship was Bunsby. He was a cruel captain he kept us in a prison for five days. The pirates also had extremely dangerous weapons such as guns cannons e.t.c. there were also some other people in the prison one of the man had a phone asked that man that if I could borrow his phone for a minute. He accepted my request when he gave me the phone.
    When he gave me the phone I called my father he asked me where I was. I told him that I was near a small island a small volcano was erupting from the ground my father called the police to rescue us on a navy. The arrived there after fifteen minutes and it saved us all who were in the prison. When I reached home my father thanked the police. I told this to my class fellows when the summer vacations were over.

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  4. Journey on a space ship
    One day my friend Zoha came to my house to play. We went to the same school so my mom picked her up. Home-Time was at 1:00 pm. She came over to my house till 8:00. When it was 5:30 we heard something it sounded like something crashed. We looked outside the window. It was a big space ship. WE went outside and went in it although we shouldn’t have touched it if it was not ours. Zoha accidently fell on a button but the bad, part was not that it was actually that the button Zoha fell on was the launching button. We were trying to open the door but it was locked and we only had 10 seconds left so we sat down and put on our seat belts. It was very fast. Then it finally landed. We got off and we totally freaked out. We were on the moon. We closed the door. Zoha found some space suits there were three space suits. We got one each. We walked on the moon and it was actually lots of fun but we still had to get home. I remembered that my mom said she will check on us at 7:50, it was 6:15. Over there we met two aliens her name was Pallavi and there was another alien named Mahikka. They were sisters. They said that the ship was theirs. They told us that we can come in and they will take us home. We got in but then we did not go back on Earth we had reached on the planet Saturn. It was very cold on Saturn. They told us that their space ship had a problem and that the problem with it was that sometimes it did not exactly go where they wanted it to sometimes it went to some other planet. Then we went again but now it went on Uranus. Then we tried again we were getting close because this time we were on the planet Jupiter. Now it finally landed on Earth but we did not know where my house was. Lucky for us the aliens had a type of scanner. When they scanned us they knew the place we had to go. Then we were home we said thank you and goodbye to the aliens and we went home. To our surprise we were home at 7:30. Then Zoha’s mom arrived so we said bye and went safely home.

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  5. Journey in a pirate ship
    One day me and my friends visited the cruise. We enjoyed a lot. When we were near the pacific ocean, we were attacked by pirates. They stole all the gold in the cruise. We were kidnapped by captain Red Scar. We were imprisoned for two weeks. The captain was cruel ugly and wore a black hat and red coat. I met a prisoner who was hundred years old and he was very shabby. His name was Buchagi he was once a captain of a great hip belonging to India during the wars he had misbehaved with red scar once and he was imprisoned for a hundred years. He told us that no one could escape red scar. The pirates had dangerous weapons like sharp swords, guns and cannons. He had a huge crew some were old some were young . He freed us after two weeks we were then forced to walk the plank , We were hopeless we saved ourselves by claiming to be his minions. The next night when captain red scar was asleep a navy copter headed towards the ship we signaled it by burning our jackets. We arrived in town after three hours. Our parents were very happy to see us .

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  6. A journey on a spaceship

    One day me and my friend, Aashir went on a scavenger hunt with a metal detector.
    After me walked a few miles the detector started beeping a lot so me and my friend started digging. We found a few things that looked like an elevator. We analyzed that they were escape pods which came from an alien ship. Soon a pod opened and an alien came out. It started speaking an alien language but it realized we were Humans so they started speaking English. We looked at it carefully and it had somewhat of a triangle face and a glowing body. It told us that it’s name was Nekros and it came here with his alien friends including Rhino, Volt, Excalibur, Loki, Frost and Ash. They told us that there was very little water left on their planet and they needed our help to save their planet as Humans were the best at preserving water in the entire universe. They took us in a space ship and we flew billions of mile to the “bogon” galaxy. After some time the ship was attacked by alien invaders who wanted to take our ship. Me and Aashir had to wear oxygen masks and shoot the enemies before they killed us. We soon reached their planet and they showed us where the small amount of water was. We showed them how to build dams as they did not know the techniques of building them. Soon they had enough water to survive.

    They thanked us and they gave us spaceships, jetpacks and alien disguises and so we went back to Earth on our space ships.

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  7. A journey on a Pirate Ship
    One day when my friend Rubab came to my home, we went for shopping. After we had done shopping we asked our mother and father to let us go to the edge of the river, they allowed us. Suddenly we saw a pirate ship we went inside the ship. But accidently, my friend pressed a button and the ship started moving. There was a small room inside. We went inside and saw a treasure, we were opening it but it was locked. Suddenly we saw someone walking. We saw, it was a pirate. He asked our names, we said our names. His name was Jonejo. He was so kind to us. He said that he will take us back to our homes. But we refused and said to open the treasure first and then go back home. He said ok. He was finding the key all around the room and he found it in the cupboard. We opened the treasure and saw gold and silver coins, jewelries, necklaces e.t.c. We were so happy. He said us that now it’s time to go back home. We said ok and went back. That was the most memorable and best journey ever.
    Thank You!!!

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  8. Topic: A Journey on a Space Ship
    One day I was sleeping when I heard some weird noise coming from my backyard. I went down stairs to see what was making that noise. When I went outside I saw a space ship. I very amused. Suddenly the space ship opened I saw I two aliens. They were all green and their faces were huge. They had three eyes, two arms seven legs. They shook hands with me to say hello. When I said hello to them they didn’t understand I thought the aliens didn’t know English but I was wrong, they were American aliens. They were very friendly to me they invited me to there planet. When we entered the space ship they told me that they live in a planet called buncy, I saw that buncy was a green planet with grass every where with flowers and trees. When we landed all the aliens came to see me I came out of the space ship their was “OXYGEN”!. All the spoke English they took me in a place were they made their food. Then they took me to their museum. Then they gave me a gift. They gave me flowers and games. On my way back home something woke me up it was my mom and then I realized it was a dream

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  9. A Journey to a spaceship
    One night I was sleeping with my small sister in my room.so almost on 4:00 clock, suddenly a very strong light and sound came from my garden. When I went out to see what it was I saw a huge spaceship, and it was beautiful and it had pictures of aliens. When we went inside the it, it was more beautiful than outside, also it had pictures of aliens from inside, and it was colorful from inside. We went to a planet called Saturn. Then because we were very high they gave us a spaceship suit so that we could survive. We saw aliens with two heads, had one eye and four hands but some of the aliens had one head, three eyes and two hands, except for the king he had four big heads, six eyes eight hands, he was huge and tall and he was thin. The aliens were stinky, very dirty, some of them were fat and some were thin and there body color was grey and white. When my sister saw them she cried because she was scared of them but they were very kind to us, that when they saw my sister crying they tried to keep her quiet and also when they came to Earth they bought ships but they didn’t know what was it so they asked me if I now what was this so I told them yes I know it, this is called ships they said yes, and they gave my sister one and me one. Then my sister said it is yummy, I said yes. The best thing in them was that they were kind and they were taking in English. When we asked them can we go home the said ok and the King had a phone so he gave it to me and I called my father and mother that I am coming they ok we are waiting for you, they dropped us home and went.
    The End

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  10. A Journey on the pirate ship

    One night, there was a sound in the sea , And i go to look there. It is a ship floated at the edge's of the sea, and i sleep inside the ship because i don't have any houses to lived.
    When i woke up i am in the island of pirates. It is a bit scary, surrounded with high mountains and coconut trees. Then i saw the pirates standing on my head when i was sleeping.
    The pirates were a bit scary from hand to head. And there are 2 hands, other side are hook and other are normal human hand, and their were very scary.
    I like this story very much.
    Thank You
    The End

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  11. Journey on a Pirate Ship
    Once I had a chance to visit the beach almost at the end of the coastal line with my friends. The water was at rage as the high tides were hitting the big rocks emerging the noise in the environment. While playing on rocks, we went on the other side of the rocks, where we saw ship. The ship seemed empty. We stepped on the ship and went inside its cabin. The ship was already moving because of the waves that is why we couldn't figure out that it had started running in the sea. We were busy eating chocolates in the inner room of the cabin. When we came out, we saw two giant men staring at us. One of them had the one eye covered and was wearing the black hat as we had seen in many pictures. They asked us, "Who are you and how did you get in our ship." We were speechless and stared at each other in fear. When we came to our senses, we were tied up with a pole. We looked up at the pole and saw the pirate flag waving high. After the sun set, they gave us fruits to eat. One of the giant men said, "We are resting in the cabin. You have the whole night to think about either you want to spend your life as a slave serving us or you want to be thrown in the middle of the sea.
    The pirates had left. My friends were about to cry. I asked them not to and think of ways to get out of here. Suddenly, I had an idea. I asked Yasir, "Yasir, you know how to climb up on anything." He said yes. I asked him to climb up the pole backward and release his hands at the end of the pole. He did that. After hard efforts, he was able to reach the end of the pole. He tried to move his tied hands over the pole and slid down slowly.
    I asked him to untie our hands. In few minutes, we were free to move around. Yasir found a small rescue boat on the side of the ship. We all sat in it and pulled it down into the sea. Two of us tried to move the oars on the way the ship came from. We rowed for whole night. The sun was rising. Some fishermen saw us and helped us to move in their fishing boats. They helped us get to the town police where we told them the whole story and asked them to contact our parents.

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  12. JOURNEY ON A SPACE SHIP:-
    In 2007 aliens attacked earth. Innocent people, friends even families lost. Aliens destroyed half of earth. But we defeated them and we will do so again. Heroes of saving earth were MAZER ANDERSON, JACK ANDERSON and GWEN ANDERSON. They say that the worlds smartest children are the worlds last hope. They offered me a place in their program to run spaceships to be a leader and have two partners to help you! When I got into my spaceship I saw my two partners they RAYYAN and MUSTAFA. They helped me when I was confused. when ever I went for riding spaceships I thought it was like having a journey on a spaceship and I loved it!!!

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  13. once i went to a sea trip with my parents and a few friends. when we found a hotel to sleep at night me and my friends went out for a walk. when we had walk a little far from the hotel. one of mine friends said let's go for fishing. so i found a boat and some fishing roads and went for fishing. after a little while we landed on a island. we lost our way to the hotel. once a pirate ship pass trough , they let us in there ship and rescued us and took us back to the sea. mean while when we were on the ship i found that they eat raw food and spoke a strange language. i found a women how was the friend of that pirate and had two children they had a servant too. who had a wooden leg. they all were a black patch on one eye. i found them very frindly and kind.
    thank you
    the end

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  14. once me and my friend mustafa went to lake view park we were riding the bboat ourselves sunddenly a huge strom came it led us to an island me and my friend got scared while we were exploring the island w cannone saw pirates ship and they captured us it was a huge ship with cannons we were locked as prisoners after 10 min the sound of guns getting fired and the jail where we were locked opened i saw out of a window a fight between spainards and black beard was going ma and my friend mustfa with great skill went out we went to the place where we landed we took the boat and went home it was the best pirate journey ever!!

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