Topic: IF I WIN A TICKET TO WILLY WONK'S FACTORY WHAT IS WILL DO
If i win a ticket to Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory I would go to the chocolate factory and I will first go to the chocolate river. I went close to the river the I drank 10 cups of chocolate and then I went to to the chocolate boat it started with milk then I saw the bubble maker machine then I get a whole pack of bubbles then I went to the roller strawberry candies maker then I went to the mango singing house which was full of mango juice finally reached the end of the factory the I went to the end door they had huge drums of chocolate. I wish this would be real . Thank you.
One day I was watching news and the voice said, "Willy Wonka has sent out 5 golden tickets in five different chocolates whoever wins it can come to his factory." Three weeks later 3 kids only found the tickets. the 1st one two find it was JASH ZAKARIYA. The 2nd one was MIKE HOLLOW. And the last one was KACY WHITE. So that means only 2 tickets are left! I made a wish that if l could win the last ticket. And the second last one was VIOLET BUCRADE. After one week I got some pocket money from my father and I went to the corner shop near my house. I told the counterman to give me a WONKA chocolate. I casually opened the chocolate like every other day and I couldn't not believe my eyes, I found the last GOLDEN TICKET. I ran home and told everyone I won the last golden ticket. I said I will go with my dad to the factory. The day we had to go was tomorrow at 12:00 PM sharp in the morning. Me and my dad arrived the earliest. The others arrived 30 minutes after me. When we went in we met Willy Wonka. He took us in the room that is only eatable. I saw a water fall of chocolate and a pipe that collects chocolate from the chocolate river. Willy Wonka gave us 5 kids different types of chocolates. Like dark chocolate, strawberry chocolate, plain chocolate and caramel chocolate. There was only 1 room left. In the last room there were different workers called LOOMPY- COOMPAS My overall visit was unforgettable. I was impressed and amazed by this factory and I will go to it again. And I am thankful to Allah for giving me such a wonderful experience.
One day I was watching TV I heard news that WILLY WONKA has sent 5 golden tickets in the willy wonkas chocolate and only 1 was left I went to the store to by a chocolate first when i went there was no golden tickets second time there was also no golden tickets then the third i opened in the store there was a golden ticket i was so happy then the people in the store said please give it to me but i said no i will not give it to you and i ran away. When i went home my family was so happy. When i red the inteructions it was written that come to the factory 27 feb and it was tomorrow morning 12 o'clock. When tomorrow at 12 o'clock me and my father went there went we went there it was a huge gate and everyone was waiting when the gates were opened we all went inside there was a door than it was opened we went inside and we met Willy Wonka thean the final gate was opened it was so beautiful everything was eatable even the grass then willy wonka said go enjoy we went and ate everything and i also made friends i saw chocolate waterfall and willy wonka gave us some spiceal chocolate we ate it after that the winner was announced and it was me and the second one was my friend and i was so happy and when we were going he gave me and my friend lots of chocolate than we went home and enjoy eating chocolate and the others were crying.
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory. One day on a hot day I was going on a walk with my friend Isbah. My mom gave us some money and a phone so that we can call then if we are having trouble. We were gone to have some Willy Wonka’s chocolate we liked it a lot and it came for only one dollar. Then suddenly my mom called us. I picked it up and she told us that three people are going to win a ticket to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory, and because me and Isbah love Willy Wonka’s chocolate we might win a ticket. I spent all the money my mom gave me. We got 20 chocolates so I got 10 and she got 10. After eating and eating we had one left but when I opened it there was no golden ticket. Then Isbah opened it and she got it. She was very happy. When I came home I wanted to watch TV I put it on and it was something of Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory but I did not want to see it because I thought it might just be repeating that three people will win a golden ticket. When I was changing the channels I saw that the same thing was coming on each channel so I listened. It was actually saying that a girl named Zoha won the other ticket and she was my friend to. I took fifty dollars out of my money box and asked my mom if I could go and buy some chocolate. My mom said yes. I went and bought fifty chocolates I ate thirty chocolates in the shop and the rest I went home and ate. I had five chocolates left. I ate them now finally when it was time to eat the last one a golden ticket came out. My heart was filled of joy. Now all 3 kids have got golden tickets but our parents or even an adult can’t come with us. Isbah, Zoha and Me. When we got there it was a huge factory. There were some mountains behind it made of chocolate and Willy wonka was kind of looking like a clown. He had a wig which was red, blue, green and purple but his clothes were brown well they did not look like a clown at all. When we went in it looked bountiful. There was a chocolate river lake and waterfall there were also statues of living creatures made of white chocolate. Then we sat on a huge ship. It had fifty big seats. We sat on it. Willy wonka told us that there are two hundred and twenty five floors. Time past and we saw awesome things .It was six o’clock but none of us got out. Its ten o’clock. We all were very tired. We told Willy wonka and he said he has one extra room and that we can use it. When we came in it did not make us very happy. The bed was made of chocolate our bathroom was made of chocolate our toothbrush was made of chocolate but we did not say anything to Willy Wonka. All of us just said Thank You. We didn’t sleep although we were very tired. We all went outside and slept on the grass. Zoha woke up at one o’clock and she was frightened because just when she opened her eyes Willy wonka was right in front of her. Zoha screamed so loud that she woke us up to. We continued our journey but Willy wonka said he has a surprise for us. He got us in a room which was “Surprise Room In the “Surprise Room “there were more rooms. He took us in a room which was ‘Winner’. We understood what it meant. We did not like what it meant. There was a board covered with a blanket. First he told us that whoever wins will get his whole factory. When he pulled it we all were so happy because all of us won we told our parents they were all proud of us. They came to the factory as fast as they could. We made some changes their though like the bed. Starting from that day on we lived a chocolaty life.
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory.
One day there was the day that i won a 1st prize as the ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory, the 2nd prize is Fillah Whagi and the 3rd prize Ana gigei. When i went inside a chocolate factory, there a chocolate lake and chocolate chair and table, it is full of chocolate inside , it is very very fun in there. This chocolate factory is in England. I buy a spoons, forks and plate that made from 100 percent real chocolate. It 100 dollars for each set. Then i went to taste the lake of chocolate by putting it up from the glass and i drank it, it is very very yummy and tasty. I went to the trees of the chocolate factory, each of them is green, white and red. Then i went back to home by a coaster safely. THANK-YOU. The End.
Topic:I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory.
One day me and my friend Natdanisha went out for a walk. My mom gave me some money, when I sawlate factory that 3 lucky people were going towin a golden ticket to willy wonka's chocolate factory!. we went to the nearest shop and bought 20 willy wonka chocolate. I got 10 and she got 10.Ater eating so many there were only 1 left with natdhanisha and two left with me. she got none but luckyly I got two ticket so I gave 1 to her and the ticket say that we were to came to the factory at 12 march that means tomorrow at12 am sharp.i saw chocolate river, and lake water fall every single thing made of chocolate. thank you the end
I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory Once I heard on the news `` Greetings my tiny friends Willy Wonka here. Now listen there are five golden tickets in one of my chocolate bars, so what’s the wait buy my whipple scrumptious fudge-mallow delight, chocolate nice cream or millionaires shortbread.’’ I couldn’t wait I told my dad I wanted a wonka chocolate bar. Then he took me to the corner shop and bought me a wonka bar. I opened the chocolate bar without looking at it I was not so lucky. Then the first person who found the golden ticket was Tommy Anders, second was Chris Albert,third was Ali that meant only 2 tickets left!. Then the next day I got two hundred rupees to buy a chocolate bar. I bought a wonka bar and tore the wrapper I was so excited that I won a golden ticket.The 5th person who found the golden ticket was Sara. I told my dad to take me to willy wonka’s chocolate factory. My dad took me there in the morning at 8:00 a.m that was the time written on the golden ticket to visit the factory. At 8:30 am the gates were open and MR. WILLY WONKA STOOD by the door leading inside the factory. Willy Wonka had a very funny hair- cut with a red suit,a purple funny bow tie and fine polished shoes. First he took me and the other children to the fudge room. Over there were fountains of chocolate fudge and the hilarious fudge cake mountain .He told us to enjoy ourselves,so first I placed my mouth under the fudge fountain the fudge was awesome!. Then I had four slices of the fudge cake mountain. Then we visited the chocolate room where the chocolate was invented Mr. Wonka told us many chocolate facts. He also gave me a nutty surprise chocolate as I behaved very well . Next we visited the grape juice river It was very cool. The juice was very tasty and healthy. Next Willy Wonka took us to ice cream polar I ate the chipper berry swirl and kernel puff caramel stuff flavors. That was the end of the factory. As a gift to all children Willy Wonka gave everyone a chocolate bar. I enjoyed a lot and it was the most memorable day of my life.
I won a ticket Once when I was only six I loved chocolates I always ate them when ever my father brings them one day when I was watching TV I heard the door rang so I went to check who was it there was a man standing with a box and the whole box and went when I opened it there were two tickets and a bunch of chocolates was in there so I went to tell my Dad that I got two tickets to willi wonka’s chocolate factory I was really excited to go but first I asked my father if I could take my friend Maha with me so he said ok on Monday we went to the factory it was really big and everything there was made of chocolate we spent the whole day there and then later I saw another kid who was fighting to jump in a chocolate river then we went back home and we had a really fun day. Me and Maha had a really fun day
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory One day on Saturday morning. In our spring holidays I saw a news coming on T.V about Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory. There were five golden tickets the first five children who won the tickets can visit willy wonka’s chocolate factory. On Sunday I got my pocket money and I went to al-Fatah and bought five Willy Wonka’s chocolates I tore the rapper of and looked for the golden ticket i didn’t find any chocolate .on the last chocolate I luckily found a golden ticket. I jumped with excitement .on Monday morning at 8:00 o clock I was on the bus. Our journey was about half an hour we were in Willy wonkas chocolate factory I was shocked to see so much chocolate there were fountains of chocolate rivers of chocolate mountains of chocolate waterfalls of chocolate i also met Mr.Willy Wonka he was wise man with lots of fun we enjoyed a lot i also swimmed in the chocolate factory I came back to home at 5 o clock in the evening i was very tired after a long journey these were the best spring holidays in my whole life.
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory One day in winter’s I heard in the news that Willy Wonka has send 5 golden tickets in Willy Wonka’s chocolate but in the news they told us that 4 tickets have been found by Favase from INDIA, ALISA from RUSSIA, SOHGE from HONG KONG AND SUES from PARIS. Then my mother took me to a shop there I bought 3 Willy Wonka’s chocolate. When I opened the first chocolate there was nothing. When I opened the second chocolate there was nothing but when I opened the third chocolate I found the last golden ticket. I was very happy I showed it to my mom she was happy too. Then I and my mom went home and I saw the instructions very carefully. It said that at 34 of January The gates of his factory will be opened and only the winners could come inside and the winners must bring any adult with them. I decided to bring my mother with me. Then came 34 January my mother took me to Willy Wonka’s factory at 9:00 am and the gates were opened and the winners and their parents walked in and Mr.Willy Wonka was waiting for us. Then he greed us and took us inside and then took us to a room the door was small but he opened the door it such a huge room and it a chocolate river and then Mr.Willy Wonka us that very thing in this is was made up of chocolate to eat up as much we can eat and to enjoy. Then took an apple when I took a bite it was made of chocolate and I loved it. Then Alias saw something she called us all and Mr.Willy Wonka she asked what were those small living things then Mr.Willy Wonka said they were called olypicsm and then Mr.Willy Wonka told the story how he found them. Then he took us to an elevator it could go anywhere. In Mr.Willy Wonka’s factory there was a mountain Mr.Willy Wonka took us to see it then he gave us a huge packets of chocolates and then we went back home.
I'm sorry Uzair please forgive me. Tell your mom and dad that I am extremely sorry about what I did to your face I promise that I won't do it again. Lets be friends. Please?
One day I went to visit my grandmother’s house. When I went there my grandfather was watching the news and I was very bored because I couldn’t watch cartoons. Then something interesting came on the news. The people in the news were saying that Willy Wonka was giving away five golden tickets in any five regular wonka bars. I wanted one so badly that I would do anything to get my hands on a golden ticket. In the news they had interviewed the child who won the first golden ticket and his name was Timmy Gates and he was addicted to the T.V. The second person to find a golden ticket was Aashir Abassi, My best very best friend. The third person to find a golden ticket was a spoilt girl named Bella Lakes. The fourth one to find the ticket was an obese boy named Solomon Fatty. I wished that I found one but I didn’t as the fifth was found by Rebecca Dash. The next day I stood in front of Willy Wonka’s factory, sulking that I didn’t’ win a ticket but then a sixth ticket came out of the ticket came out of the factory and I caught it. I found an extra ticket and I was so happy and I ran to my house as fast as I could. My mother read out the instructions and it said that we had to come to the factory the next day and we had to bring a parent to supervise us. When I went there I couldn’t wait to get inside to see all the things in his factory. We went inside and I began to feel that Willy Wonka was being rude because he would make fun of our names when we introduced ourselves to him. When we went inside we saw a huge garden full of candies and a waterfall of chocolate. Solomon Fatty fell in the chocolate river because he overreacted and started eating everything and fell into the river but didn’t die as a chocolate pipe sucked him up. In the second room they were making gobstoppers and Rebecca Dash thought she could do everything and was a champion in everything so she ate an unfinished bubblegum and she turned fat and swelled up and turned into a ball. The girl Bella Lakes was so spoilt that when her dad did not get her a trained squirrel that she went to get one herself and got thrown into the sewer by the squirrels. Then the tour had ended and only me and my friend Aashir were left and as a special prize we got a huge house of chocolate.
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory On Sunday morning in my spring break I was watching the cartoon on the T.V. and they brought a cartoon of Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory and after it was finished they said that there is a very good news and they said that there are five golden tickets in a chocolate called Willy Wonka’s chocolate in the shop Willy Wonka and the five first children who will get these golden tickets will go to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory. Then I told my father that I want to go to this shop then he said ok, I was lucky because the shop was near to my house, so my father went with me and we went to the shop and my father bought three chocolates I thought all of them would have golden tickets but the man said that only five chocolates will have golden tickets and you will be lucky if you have a golden ticket so I was very scared so after my father bought the three chocolates and we went in the car I ate the first one there was nothing the second one also there was nothing but in the third one I found the golden ticket and I went again to the shop and gave the ticket then there were also four more children and on Monday we went to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory.
On Sunday morning I took my family went for shopping. We were buying things I asked my mother if I could buy a chocolate for myself she said fine buy it. I bought it and when I opened it there was a golden ticket. My face was filled up with joy, I was very surprised. And there were four more people who won the tickets, the first one's Saleha the second one's name was Amna and the third one's name was Mahnoor. We were all so happy. Inside the ticket there was a small note and it was written that we had to come at exactly 4:00 sharp. We were all ready. I took my mother and father there.I had four slices of the fudge cake mountain. Then we visited the chocolate room where the chocolate was invented Mr. Wonka told us many chocolate facts. I enjoyed the trip very much!!!!
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ReplyDeleteIf i win a ticket to Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory I would go to the chocolate
factory and I will first go to the chocolate river. I went close to the river the I drank
10 cups of chocolate and then I went to to the chocolate boat it started with milk
then I saw the bubble maker machine then I get a whole pack of bubbles then I
went to the roller strawberry candies maker then I went to the mango singing
house which was full of mango juice finally reached the end of the factory the
I went to the end door they had huge drums of chocolate. I wish this would be real .
Thank you.
Rehman, write what you have written again and in the proper tense.
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ReplyDeleteHamzah, write it again and in one tense. I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory. How did you win the ticket... then what happened?
DeleteSorry teacher I will write it again.
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ReplyDeleteOne day I was watching news and the voice said, "Willy Wonka has sent out 5 golden tickets in five different chocolates whoever wins it can come to his factory." Three weeks later 3 kids only found the tickets. the 1st one two find it was JASH ZAKARIYA. The 2nd one was MIKE HOLLOW. And the last one was KACY WHITE. So that means only 2 tickets are left! I made a wish that if l could win the last ticket. And the second last one was VIOLET BUCRADE.
ReplyDeleteAfter one week I got some pocket money from my father and I went to the corner shop near my house. I told the counterman to give me a WONKA chocolate. I casually opened the chocolate like every other day and I couldn't not believe my eyes, I found the last GOLDEN TICKET. I ran home and told everyone I won the last golden ticket. I said I will go with my dad to the factory. The day we had to go was tomorrow at 12:00 PM sharp in the morning. Me and my dad arrived the earliest. The others arrived 30 minutes after me. When we went in we met Willy Wonka. He took us in the room that is only eatable. I saw a water fall of chocolate and a pipe that collects chocolate from the chocolate river. Willy Wonka gave us 5 kids different types of chocolates. Like dark chocolate, strawberry chocolate, plain chocolate and caramel chocolate. There was only 1 room left. In the last room there were different workers called LOOMPY- COOMPAS
My overall visit was unforgettable. I was impressed and amazed by this factory and I will go to it again.
And I am thankful to Allah for giving me such a wonderful experience.
THE END.
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ReplyDeleteOne day I was watching TV I heard news that WILLY WONKA has sent 5 golden tickets in the willy wonkas chocolate and only 1 was left I went to the store to by a chocolate first when i went there was no golden tickets second time there was also no golden tickets then the third i opened in the store there was a golden ticket i was so happy then the people in the store said please give it to me but i said no i will not give it to you and i ran away.
ReplyDeleteWhen i went home my family was so happy. When i red the inteructions it was written that come to the factory 27 feb and it was tomorrow morning 12 o'clock. When tomorrow at 12 o'clock me and my father went there went we went there it was a huge gate and everyone was waiting when the gates were opened we all went inside there was a door than it was opened we went inside and we met Willy Wonka thean the final gate was opened it was so beautiful everything was eatable even the grass then willy wonka said go enjoy we went and ate everything and i also made friends i saw chocolate waterfall and willy wonka gave us some spiceal chocolate we ate it after that the winner was announced and it was me and the second one was my friend and i was so happy and when we were going he gave me and my friend lots of chocolate than we went home and enjoy eating chocolate and the others were crying.
THE END
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory.
ReplyDeleteOne day on a hot day I was going on a walk with my friend Isbah. My mom gave us some money and a phone so that we can call then if we are having trouble. We were gone to have some Willy Wonka’s chocolate we liked it a lot and it came for only one dollar. Then suddenly my mom called us. I picked it up and she told us that three people are going to win a ticket to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory, and because me and Isbah love Willy Wonka’s chocolate we might win a ticket. I spent all the money my mom gave me. We got 20 chocolates so I got 10 and she got 10. After eating and eating we had one left but when I opened it there was no golden ticket. Then Isbah opened it and she got it. She was very happy. When I came home I wanted to watch TV I put it on and it was something of Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory but I did not want to see it because I thought it might just be repeating that three people will win a golden ticket. When I was changing the channels I saw that the same thing was coming on each channel so I listened. It was actually saying that a girl named Zoha won the other ticket and she was my friend to. I took fifty dollars out of my money box and asked my mom if I could go and buy some chocolate. My mom said yes. I went and bought fifty chocolates I ate thirty chocolates in the shop and the rest I went home and ate. I had five chocolates left. I ate them now finally when it was time to eat the last one a golden ticket came out. My heart was filled of joy. Now all 3 kids have got golden tickets but our parents or even an adult can’t come with us. Isbah, Zoha and Me. When we got there it was a huge factory. There were some mountains behind it made of chocolate and Willy wonka was kind of looking like a clown. He had a wig which was red, blue, green and purple but his clothes were brown well they did not look like a clown at all. When we went in it looked bountiful. There was a chocolate river lake and waterfall there were also statues of living creatures made of white chocolate. Then we sat on a huge ship. It had fifty big seats. We sat on it. Willy wonka told us that there are two hundred and twenty five floors. Time past and we saw awesome things .It was six o’clock but none of us got out. Its ten o’clock. We all were very tired. We told Willy wonka and he said he has one extra room and that we can use it. When we came in it did not make us very happy. The bed was made of chocolate our bathroom was made of chocolate our toothbrush was made of chocolate but we did not say anything to Willy Wonka. All of us just said Thank You. We didn’t sleep although we were very tired. We all went outside and slept on the grass. Zoha woke up at one o’clock and she was frightened because just when she opened her eyes Willy wonka was right in front of her. Zoha screamed so loud that she woke us up to. We continued our journey but Willy wonka said he has a surprise for us. He got us in a room which was “Surprise Room In the “Surprise Room “there were more rooms. He took us in a room which was ‘Winner’. We understood what it meant. We did not like what it meant. There was a board covered with a blanket. First he told us that whoever wins will get his whole factory. When he pulled it we all were so happy because all of us won we told our parents they were all proud of us. They came to the factory as fast as they could. We made some changes their though like the bed. Starting from that day on we lived a chocolaty life.
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory.
ReplyDeleteOne day there was the day that i won a 1st prize as the ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory, the 2nd prize is Fillah Whagi and the 3rd prize Ana gigei.
When i went inside a chocolate factory, there a chocolate lake and chocolate chair and table, it is full of chocolate inside , it is very very fun in there. This chocolate factory is in England. I buy a spoons, forks and plate that made from 100 percent real chocolate. It 100 dollars for each set. Then i went to taste the lake of chocolate by putting it up from the glass and i drank it, it is very very yummy and tasty. I went to the trees of the chocolate factory, each of them is green, white and red. Then i went back to home by a coaster safely. THANK-YOU.
The End.
Topic:I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's chocolate factory.
ReplyDeleteOne day me and my friend Natdanisha went out for a walk. My mom gave me some money, when I sawlate factory that 3 lucky people were going towin a golden ticket to willy wonka's chocolate factory!. we went to the nearest shop and bought 20 willy wonka chocolate. I got 10 and she got 10.Ater eating so many there were only 1 left with natdhanisha and two left with me. she got none but luckyly I got two ticket so I gave 1 to her and the ticket say that we were to came to the factory at 12 march that means tomorrow at12 am sharp.i saw chocolate river, and lake water fall every single thing made of chocolate.
thank you
the end
I won a ticket to Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory
ReplyDeleteOnce I heard on the news `` Greetings my tiny friends Willy Wonka here. Now listen there are five golden tickets in one of my chocolate bars, so what’s the wait buy my whipple scrumptious fudge-mallow delight, chocolate nice cream or millionaires shortbread.’’ I couldn’t wait I told my dad I wanted a wonka chocolate bar. Then he took me to the corner shop and bought me a wonka bar. I opened the chocolate bar without looking at it I was not so lucky. Then the first person who found the golden ticket was Tommy Anders, second was Chris Albert,third was Ali that meant only 2 tickets left!. Then the next day I got two hundred rupees to buy a chocolate bar. I bought a wonka bar and tore the wrapper I was so excited that I won a golden ticket.The 5th person who found the golden ticket was Sara. I told my dad to take me to willy wonka’s chocolate factory. My dad took me there in the morning at 8:00 a.m that was the time written on the golden ticket to visit the factory. At 8:30 am the gates were open and MR. WILLY WONKA STOOD by the door leading inside the factory. Willy Wonka had a very funny hair- cut with a red suit,a purple funny bow tie and fine polished shoes. First he took me and the other children to the fudge room. Over there were fountains of chocolate fudge and the hilarious fudge cake mountain .He told us to enjoy ourselves,so first I placed my mouth under the fudge fountain the fudge was awesome!. Then I had four slices of the fudge cake mountain. Then we visited the chocolate room where the chocolate was invented Mr. Wonka told us many chocolate facts. He also gave me a nutty surprise chocolate as I behaved very well . Next we visited the grape juice river It was very cool. The juice was very tasty and healthy. Next Willy Wonka took us to ice cream polar I ate the chipper berry swirl and kernel puff caramel stuff flavors. That was the end of the factory. As a gift to all children Willy Wonka gave everyone a chocolate bar. I enjoyed a lot and it was the most memorable day of my life.
I won a ticket
ReplyDeleteOnce when I was only six I loved chocolates I always ate them when ever my father brings them one day when I was watching TV I heard the door rang so I went to check who was it there was a man standing with a box and the whole box and went when I opened it there were two tickets and a bunch of chocolates was in there so I went to tell my Dad that I got two tickets to willi wonka’s chocolate factory I was really excited to go but first I asked my father if I could take my friend Maha with me so he said ok on Monday we went to the factory it was really big and everything there was made of chocolate we spent the whole day there and then later I saw another kid who was fighting to jump in a chocolate river then we went back home and we had a really fun day. Me and Maha had a really fun day
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory
ReplyDeleteOne day on Saturday morning. In our spring holidays I saw a news coming on T.V about Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory. There were five golden tickets the first five children who won the tickets can visit willy wonka’s chocolate factory. On Sunday I got my pocket money and I went to al-Fatah and bought five Willy Wonka’s chocolates I tore the rapper of and looked for the golden ticket i didn’t find any chocolate .on the last chocolate
I luckily found a golden ticket. I jumped with excitement .on Monday morning at 8:00 o clock I was on the bus. Our journey was about half an hour we were in Willy wonkas chocolate factory I was shocked to see so much chocolate there were fountains of chocolate rivers of chocolate mountains of chocolate waterfalls of chocolate i also met Mr.Willy Wonka he was wise man with lots of fun we enjoyed a lot i also swimmed in the chocolate factory
I came back to home at 5 o clock in the evening i was very tired after a long journey these were the best spring holidays in my whole life.
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ReplyDeleteOne day in winter’s I heard in the news that Willy Wonka has send 5 golden tickets in Willy Wonka’s chocolate but in the news they told us that 4 tickets have been found by Favase from INDIA, ALISA from RUSSIA, SOHGE from HONG KONG AND SUES from PARIS. Then my mother took me to a shop there I bought 3 Willy Wonka’s chocolate. When I opened the first chocolate there was nothing. When I opened the second chocolate there was nothing but when I opened the third chocolate I found the last golden ticket. I was very happy I showed it to my mom she was happy too. Then I and my mom went home and I saw the instructions very carefully. It said that at 34 of January
The gates of his factory will be opened and only the winners could come inside and the winners must bring any adult with them. I decided to bring my mother with me. Then came 34 January my mother took me to Willy Wonka’s factory at 9:00 am and the gates were opened and the winners and their parents walked in and Mr.Willy Wonka was waiting for us. Then he greed us and took us inside and then took us to a room the door was small but he opened the door it such a huge room and it a chocolate river and then Mr.Willy Wonka us that very thing in this is was made up of chocolate to eat up as much we can eat and to enjoy. Then took an apple when I took a bite it was made of chocolate and I loved it. Then Alias saw something she called us all and Mr.Willy Wonka she asked what were those small living things then Mr.Willy Wonka said they were called olypicsm
and then Mr.Willy Wonka told the story how he found them. Then he took us to an elevator it could go anywhere. In Mr.Willy Wonka’s factory there was a mountain Mr.Willy Wonka took us to see it then he gave us a huge packets of chocolates and then we went back home.
I'm sorry Uzair please forgive me. Tell your mom and dad that I am extremely sorry about what I did to your face I promise that I won't do it again. Lets be friends. Please?
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ReplyDeleteOne day I went to visit my grandmother’s house. When I went there my grandfather was watching the news and I was very bored because I couldn’t watch cartoons. Then something interesting came on the news. The people in the news were saying that Willy Wonka was giving away five golden tickets in any five regular wonka bars.
ReplyDeleteI wanted one so badly that I would do anything to get my hands on a golden ticket. In the news they had interviewed the child who won the first golden ticket and his name was Timmy Gates and he was addicted to the T.V. The second person to find a golden ticket was Aashir Abassi, My best very best friend. The third person to find a golden ticket was a spoilt girl named Bella Lakes. The fourth one to find the ticket was an obese boy named Solomon Fatty. I wished that I found one but I didn’t as the fifth was found by Rebecca Dash. The next day I stood in front of Willy Wonka’s factory, sulking that I didn’t’ win a ticket but then a sixth ticket came out of the ticket came out of the factory and I caught it. I found an extra ticket and I was so happy and I ran to my house as fast as I could. My mother read out the instructions and it said that we had to come to the factory the next day and we had to bring a parent to supervise us. When I went there I couldn’t wait to get inside to see all the things in his factory. We went inside and I began to feel that Willy Wonka was being rude because he would make fun of our names when we introduced ourselves to him. When we went inside we saw a huge garden full of candies and a waterfall of chocolate. Solomon Fatty fell in the chocolate river because he overreacted and started eating everything and fell into the river but didn’t die as a chocolate pipe sucked him up. In the second room they were making gobstoppers and Rebecca Dash thought she could do everything and was a champion in everything so she ate an unfinished bubblegum and she turned fat and swelled up and turned into a ball. The girl Bella Lakes was so spoilt that when her dad did not get her a trained squirrel that she went to get one herself and got thrown into the sewer by the squirrels.
Then the tour had ended and only me and my friend Aashir were left and as a special prize we got a huge house of chocolate.
Topic: I won a ticket to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory
ReplyDeleteOn Sunday morning in my spring break I was watching the cartoon on the T.V. and they brought a cartoon of Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory and after it was finished they said that there is a very good news and they said that there are five golden tickets in a chocolate called Willy Wonka’s chocolate in the shop Willy Wonka and the five first children who will get these golden tickets will go to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory. Then I told my father that I want to go to this shop then he said ok, I was lucky because the shop was near to my house, so my father went with me and we went to the shop and my father bought three chocolates I thought all of them would have golden tickets but the man said that only five chocolates will have golden tickets and you will be lucky if you have a golden ticket so I was very scared so after my father bought the three chocolates and we went in the car I ate the first one there was nothing the second one also there was nothing but in the third one I found the golden ticket and I went again to the shop and gave the ticket then there were also four more children and on Monday we went to Willy Wonka’s Chocolate Factory.
On Sunday morning I took my family went for shopping. We were buying things I asked my mother if I could buy a chocolate for myself she said fine buy it. I bought it and when I opened it there was a golden ticket. My face was filled up with joy, I was very surprised. And there were four more people who won the tickets, the first one's Saleha the second one's name was Amna and the third one's name was Mahnoor. We were all so happy. Inside the ticket there was a small note and it was written that we had to come at exactly 4:00 sharp. We were all ready. I took my mother and father there.I had four slices of the fudge cake mountain. Then we visited the chocolate room where the chocolate was invented Mr. Wonka told us many chocolate facts. I enjoyed the trip very much!!!!
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